A New York City ordinance of 1897 regulated the use of bicycles, manda

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A New York City ordinance of 1897  regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted  pedestrians right-of-way.

(A) regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted

(B) regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, granting

(C) regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted

(D) regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted

(E) regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted

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daagh · Accepted Answer

Important aspects of list ll ism to decide here are: 1. How many series are there? 2. What is the primary aspect of each series and what are the auxiliary phenomena?

Mind you, they all are not equal elements; here in this case, the regulation is the primacy purpose of the ordinance. The other things are incidental to the primer purpose. The various lists of the primary purpose are required to be parallel within them.

Here in the given case, we can tackle ll ism in three ways.
 
1. A New York ordinance of 1897 regulated the use of bicycle, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, requiring of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granting pedestrians right of way. (This choice is not there.

2. A New York ordinance of 1897, regulating the use of bicycle, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted pedestrians right of way( The OA)

3., Regulating the use of bicycle, a New York ordinance of 1897 mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted pedestrians right of way( This is also not there)

Amidst these various choices, let’s remember that the –ing - form of regulate i.e. ‘regulating’ in the context is a present participle and not a main verb form of the present progressive. To become present progressive, you do have to use the auxiliary verb ‘is” before the ‘ing’ form. Regulating is neither a gerund here.

The same word manifests different meanings in different contexts and each has its own legitimate purpose.

A is wrong because it treats as if the ordinance had four different but equal purposes.

blueseas · Answer

Hi amit,

OA : E

A. regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted
  not parallel.
you can't have just "mandated" in parallel to "IT granted". 
Finally, "regulated the use of bicycles" SHOULD NOT be parallel to the other elements, because the ideas aren't parallel. (all the other ideas in the list are subsumed under "regulated the use of bicycles".) 
 
B. regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all
times, granting
  you can't have a list without "and" in front of the final element.
as in (a), "regulated the use of bicycles" SHOULD NOT be parallel to the other elements, because the ideas aren't parallel. (all the other ideas in the list are subsumed under "regulated the use of bicycles".) 
 
C. regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars
at all times, and it granted
  not parallel.
you can't have just "mandated" in parallel to "IT granted" .

D. regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted
  not a sentence. you can't use "-ing" forms as verbs.
also, "granted" is not parallel to the "-ing" forms anyway.

E. regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all
times, and granted
 correct. 
  note that "regulating the use of bicycles" is NOT parallel to the other items. this is the way the sentence should be written .

HOPE IT HELPS

ExpertsGlobal5 · Answer

Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-

Meaning is crucial to solving this problem: 
Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that a New York City ordinance of 1897 regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted pedestrians right of way.

Concepts tested here: Meaning + Parallelism + Grammatical Construction

• All elements in a list must be parallel.
• A list separated by commas represents similar elements; in this case, the phrases involved have different roles in the correct meaning of the sentence.
• The introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “granting” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

A:  This answer choice incorrectly places "regulated the use of bicycles", "mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour", "required...all time", and "it granted...way" together in a list; remember, a list separated by commas represents similar elements; in this case, the phrases involved have different roles in the correct meaning of the sentence; "regulated" is the primary purpose of the ordinance, and "mandated", "required", and "granted" are subordinate actions. Further, Option A fails to maintain parallelism among "regulated the use of bicycles", "mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour", "required...all time", and "it granted...way"; please remember, all elements in a list must be parallel.

B:  This answer choice incorrectly places "regulated the use of bicycles", "mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour", and "required...all time" together in a list; remember, a list separated by commas represents similar elements; in this case, the phrases involved have different roles in the correct meaning of the sentence; "regulated" is the primary purpose of the ordinance, and "mandated" and "required". Further, Option B alters the meaning of the question through the phrase "granting pedestrians right-of-way"; the use of the "comma + present participle ("verb+ing"- “granting” in this case)" construction incorrectly implies that the ordinance required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and   as a result  , granted pedestrians the right of way; the intended meaning is that the ordinance required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and   as a separate action  , granted pedestrians the right of way; remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “granting” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

C:  This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times"; the construction of this phrase leads to an incoherent meaning; the intended meaning is that the ordinance required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times. Further, Option C fails to maintain parallelism among "mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour", "required...all time", and "it granted...way"; please remember, all elements in a list must be parallel.

D:  This answer choice fails to form a complete sentence; "regulating", "mandating", and "requiring" are all present participles ("verb+ing") acting as noun modifiers, and "granted" is part of a dependent clause, so there is no independent verb to act upon the subject - ordinance.

E:   Correct.  This answer choice acts upon the subject - "ordinance" - with the active verbs "mandated", "required", and "granted" to form a complete thought, leading to a complete sentence. Further, Option E uses the phrases "required cyclists to...all times" and "granted pedestrians right of way", conveying the intended meaning - that the ordinance required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times and,   as a separate action,   granted pedestrians right of way. Additionally, Option E correctly places only the similar elements - "mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour", "required...all time", and "granted...way" - in a list together; these three phrases all refer to actions subordinate to "regulating the use of bicycles". Besides, Option E maintains parallelism among "mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour", "required...all time", and "granted...way".

Hence, E is the best answer choice.

To understand the concept of "Comma + Present Participle for Cause-Effect Relationship" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~3 minutes):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVLneikI70Q

All the best!
Experts' Global Team

nakib77 · Answer

OA is E.
it is a meaning and ||ism question. 

the law is regulating the use of bicycles mandated X.......required y, and granted Z.... 

Only E does the job. So E is the OE.

abcd1 · Answer

not that i don't understand the difference between regulating and regulated. Of course i do, but the thing is i am not sure why is regulating being used here since the rest of the sentences in #5 are in past tense " mandated, granted"

thanks

thanks

MICKEYXITIN · Answer

i think "regulating" here is a modifier of A New York ordinance of 1897, Verb 1 (mandated) + verb 2 (required) + verb 3 (mandated) is perfect paralel structure. This ordinance is now not effected anymore (that's why main verbs are in the past), however "A New York ordinance of 1897" which is an act that regulates "the use of bicycle" is a fact so using "regulating" here is rational. Hope it helps

Chembeti · Answer

I fell for C, but after having a look at
https://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/sc- ... t7988.html

I realized my mistakes. What the above link says is:

1. 'it gratned' is not in parallel with the rest of the sentence.
2. "Required X do Y" is correct but not "Required X that they do Y"

AMITAGARWAL2 · Answer

I think it is easy... A

B Use of granting made it a modifier which is incorrect.

C, D and E - A New York City ordinance of 1897 regulating ... , and makes it is a indpendent clause for which there is not verb.

Skag55 · Answer

The only reason E appalled me is the lack of a comma before the "mandated" therefore considered as a running sentence.

A4G · Answer

If B was written as below , would it be right ?
regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour and required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, granting

I thought regulated , mandated and required are in a list and should be parallel. 
Please help me understand how to understand which ones to consider for list ?

pqhai · Answer

Hi AG
The parallel structure is:  mandated || required || granted.  <== Results of a new regulation.
In your version of B, the parallel structure can't be hold because:
- "regulated" should not be a main verb, but rather a verb-ing modifier. If "regulated" || mandated || ..... ==> It does not make sense.
- "granting" used as verb-ing modifier is not correct. It should be a main verb rather than a modifier.

Hope it helps.

vikrantgulia · Answer

Correct answer is E.
Meaning: A NY city ordinance of 1897 (about what) regulating the use of bicycle 
(what it does) 1)mandated...... ,2) required...., and 3)granted...
3 things are parallel.Now check answer which conveys similar meaning.

A.  regulated the use of bicycles , mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,  required  of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and  it granted  ...... Not parallel it granted and regulated incorrectly consider as 4 item in the list
B.  regulated the use of bicycles ,  mandated  a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,  required  cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times,  granting  .... Not parallel granting and regulated.
C.  regulating  the use of bicycles  mandated  a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,  required  cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and  it granted ... same as A
D.  regulating  the use of bicycles,  mandating  a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,  requiring  of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and  granted .... Same as B
E.  regulating  the use of bicycles  mandated  a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,  required  cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and  granted  ... Corrected regulating as the description of ordinance and 3 items of list in parallel (mandated,required,granted).

E is correct.

kinjiGC · Answer

E. regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,
required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and
granted

What I can understand is "A New York City ordinance " did the following three things 
1) mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour
2) required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times
3) and granted pedestrians right-of-way.

There by regulating the use of bicycles.

I was looking for a option as below:
A New York City ordinance of 1897 mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times and granted pedestrians right-of-way, regulating the use of bicycles.

or

Regulating the use of bicycles,A New York City ordinance of 1897 mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour,required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times and granted pedestrians right-of-way

So the verb-ing modifier modifies the whole clause.

But with option E) regulating being a verb-ing modifier should modify the preceding noun or noun entity which is "A New York City ordinance of 1897". I was actually looking for a comma separating the modifier from the subject.

Can somebody please clarify the doubt. Somehow I am not comfortable with the sentence structure (I have to, the official answer is E)

egmat · Answer

Dear Kinjal,

Thank you for posting your question here.

Here is the sentence structure of the correct version of this sentence:

• A New York City  ordinance  of 1897 (subject)
 •  regulating  the use of bicycles (verb-ing modifier that gives additional information about the ordinance)
 •  mandated  a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, (mandated = verb 1)
 •  required  cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, (required = verb 2)
 • and  granted  pedestrians right-of-way. (granted = verb 3)

Your understanding of the three parallel items on the list is perfectly fine. As you pointed out, "regulating" as a verb-ing modifier should modify the preceding noun, since there is no comma between the modifier and the noun. "Regulating" correctly modifies "ordinance" in option E. Remember that modifiers can 'jump over' other modifiers. Here, "requiring" can jump over "of 1897" to modify the preceding noun.

If I were to identify the main point of the sentence or to summarize the sentence, I would say that this sentence is about the ordinance. It tells us three things about the ordinance: it (1) mandated something, (2) required something and (3) granted something. Notice that the modifier beginning with "regulating" can be removed from the sentence without affecting the clause in any way. This is what modifiers about nouns do: they give you additional information about the noun.

You may wonder whether the status of "regulating" as a modifier can be identified by doing a meaning analysis of the original sentence. It can if you pay close attention to the intended meaning of the sentence. In the original incorrect version, "regulated" seems to be on par with the verbs "mandated," "required" and "granted". However, this is only a superficial parallel list. This can be identified by focusing on the meaning. "Regulated the use of bicycles" gives us the general information that the ordinance imposed some rules on the use of bicycles. The next three verbs actually give us three specific rules about the use of bicycles that were imposed by the ordinance. So, logically, these three items can't be on par with the general information about what the ordinance was about.

I hope this helps with your doubt!

Regards,
Meghna

mvictor · Answer

A. regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted 
here the list is not properly connected. before required and is needed.
ordinance 1) regulated; 2)mandated; and 3)required

B. regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, granting 
same mistake as in A.

C. regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted 
now the list is changed. regulating modifies the ordinance, and the ordinance now has 2 verbs: mandated and required. again the list is not properly connected.

D. regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted 
changes the 3 verbs into ing modifiers. the ordinance now does not have a verb.

E. regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted 
now regulating modifies the ordinance, which has 3 verbs that are parallel: mandated, required and granted.

rs1 · Answer

In (E), is a comma between 'bicycles' and 'mandated' required? Per the rules that I have learnt, NOUN + NO COMMA + PAST PARTICIPLE = omitted relative pronoun and verb 'be' e.g. 'which had' or similar. Bicycles didn't mandate anything. Hence, I eliminated (E).

Am I confusing 'mandated' between a past participle with past simple tense?

Thanks

Am I confusing 'mandated' between a past participle with past simple tense?

Thanks

sayantanc2k · Answer

A New York City ordinance of 1897   regulating the use of bicycles   mandated...., required......, and granted..... ......

Subject:  A New York City ordinance of 1897 
Verb:  mandated, required, granted  (3 parallel verbs in simple past tense)
Modifier for the subject:  regulating the use of bicycles

We do not need a comma before "regulating", since this present participle modifier is an essential (or restrictive) modifier - it defines the ordinance - there could be many City ordinances in 1897; the modifier specifies which of those ordinances is discussed here.

OptimusPrepJanielle · Answer

To solve this, we need to understand the meaning of the sentence first.
the law about regulating the use of bicycles mandated X.......required y, and granted Z.... (we need to make sure that these 3 things are parallel)

Correct Option: E

it is very easy to start looking into the parallelism error without understanding the meaning and mark option A as the correct answer.
Therefore, always make sure that you understand the meaning of the sentence before looking for other errors.

EducationAisle · Answer

Hi Prabhakar, participles (both  present  and  past  participles)  don't  have tense of their own. They  derive  their tense from the  main  verb. For example:

I see a crying bay .
- Present Participle  crying ; the sentence is in  simple present  tense (as indicated by the main verb  see ).

I see a crying bay .
- Present Participle  crying ; the sentence is in  simple past  tense (as indicated by the main verb  saw ).

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