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By the eighteenth century, Ossian, a legendary Scottish poet and storyteller from the third century, became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace.


(A) became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where
'to where' is incorrect with the idiom phrase 'so .. to where'. It should be 'so .. that'. Also, we are talking about past events. 'had become' is more appropriate for this situation.

(B) became as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who admired the poems of the Scottish bard so that
This incorrectly compares the scottish poet to Napolean. Also, we are talking about past events. 'had become' is more appropriate for this situation.

(C) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard, so
'mythical of a ...' sounds off. But, I can't judge this base on sound haha. I'll keep this choice for now..

(D) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
Correct use of the idiom 'so.. that'. But, this sentence incorrectly compares the Scottish bard to Napoleon as seen with the comma listings.

(E) had become as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
Correct use of the idiom 'so .. that'. The dependent clause signals intent with 'so.. that' whereas answer choice C lacks this initiation.
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By the eighteenth century, Ossian, a legendary Scottish poet and storyteller from the third century, became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace.


(A) became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where - Time marker present shows sequencing of two events. By eighteenth century something had already happened. So, correct tense past perfect "had become" is required for the previous event. Incorrect as the sentence uses simple past tense "Became"

(B) became as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who admired the poems of the Scottish bard so that - Time marker present shows sequencing of two events. By eighteenth century something had already happened. So, correct tense past perfect "had become" is required for the previous event. Incorrect as the sentence uses simple past tense "Became"


(C) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard, so - Tense usage is correct here "Had become". But, the usage of "So" is not correct. Instead of showing degree of admiration because of which the French General commissioned the two paintings, it is simply showing a result.

(D) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that Tense is fine "Had become". The use of "Homer, Dante, and French General" presents this in the form of a list. Changes the meaning.

(E) had become as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that Tense if perfectly fine. Using past perfect for the previous event. Also, the usage of "So" is correct and is correctly followed by "that" to show a result. This is "So X that Y" construction.
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Answer is E

Reasons for eliminating the other choices:

By Verb Tense: 'became' vs 'had become'
- After 'By the eighteenth century', we need past perfect.
- Simple past will be wrong
- Eliminate A and B

By Wrong Idiom 1:
- It's unidiomatic to say 'as revered and mythical OF a literary figure'
- Eliminate A, C, and D

By Wrong Idiom 2:
- The proper phrasing is 'Bonaparte so admired the poems that ...'
- The phrasing in A and B is unidiomatic
- Eliminate A and B

By meaning:
- The original author wrote that Ossian became as revered as Homer or Dante
- B and D change the meaning by adding General Bonaparte to the list of Homer and Dante (revered and mythical literary figures)
- Eliminate B and D

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By the eighteenth century, Ossian, a legendary Scottish poet and storyteller from the third century, became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace.


(A) became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where
By the eighteenth century (past indicator) and Ossian was already a legendary poet by then -- requires past perfect
I believe - to where is also wrong here

(B) became as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who admired the poems of the Scottish bard so that

Again it requires past perfect
Homer, dante and the french general appears to be a list -- nonsensical

(C) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard, so
Seriously not sure whether 'mythical of a' works -- would be curious to know
,and --- indicates new independent clause correctly.
I am finding it difficult to reject this one.

(D) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that

Only comma separated homer, dante is incorrect

(E) had become as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
all correct indicators as in C.. also that + SV would make better sentence than C.

IMO (E)
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By the eighteenth century, Ossian became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace.
-- 2 events,18th century ended and ossian became revered literary figure.Therefore,we need 'had' to represent chronology. A and B are out.
--Incorrect idiom So X...to where Y in A.

(A) became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where
--Incorrect

(B) became as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who admired the poems of the Scottish bard so that
-- Incorrect use of past tense
-- incorrect meaning.
-- Nepolean was impressed with Ossian so much so that he ordered his paintings. Nepolean was not a literary figure.

(C) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard, so
-- become of a litrary figure is incorrect.

(D) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
-- mythical of a litrary figure is incorrect
--Same meaning error as B.

(E) had become as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
--Looks ok
--By 18th century,Ossian had become litrary figure as Homer or Dante and nepolean so admired Ossian's paintings that he commitioned 2 of his paintings for his summer palace.

IMO E

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OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

Happy fourth... day of the competition, that is. We have another SC question before us; so far, these have proved devilishly difficult for the group on the whole. I did not write the questions with trickery in mind. Rather, I was hoping to craft engaging sentences that provided not just one, but a few talking points, the way a real GMAT™ question does. Are you ready to get to the bottom of another one?

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By the eighteenth century, Ossian, a legendary Scottish poet and storyteller from the third century, became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace.

(A) became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where
Right out of the gates, we encounter a crucial part of the sentence, and the simple past became does not agree with the surrounding contextual clues, namely the opening phrase, which references the eighteenth century through a progressive by instead of a moment-in-time in, and the appositive phrase, which tells us that Ossian lived in the third century. That is, we find it difficult to resolve such conflicting temporal information without pausing—someone from the third century became celebrated by the eighteenth, fifteen hundred years later.

The second part of the original sentence that is off is the inclusion of of within a comparison, one that follows a basic as _____ a [noun 1] as [noun 2]. Sure, native speakers sometimes speak this way, so the sound test might not work against this one (not that you should be using such a method to eliminate answers), but of is a completely superfluous and unidiomatic element.

Finally, the degree to which Napoleon admired the poems also follows a certain idiomatic construct: so _____ that. Again, some people in casual conversation might indicate the extent of something by dropping in to where, but that will not fly here.

With three compelling reasons to eliminate (A), we can safely check for better answers ahead.

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(B) became as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who admired the poems of the Scottish bard so that
The first issue is no different from before, but the second is where things get interesting. Notice that Homer and Dante are now mentioned as literary figures one and two in a series that ends with the French general Napoleon Bonaparte. A knowledge of history is not required to ascertain whether Napoleon was a revered and mythical poet: he is described as a general instead (not a warrior poet either, for you fans of Braveheart out there). This is a serious distortion of the logical meaning of the sentence, one that cannot be overlooked. Just in case you missed that one, though, there is a third issue that we can use to argue against (B). By moving so, the extent-to-which marker turns into an explanatory marker instead, and who admired... so that is not a correct way to express that the general admired some poems to the extent that he ordered something. One, two, three strikes you're out.

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(C) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard, so
First off, notice that the issue with became has now been rectified with a past perfect had become. The change correctly bridges the time gap between the third and eighteenth centuries, as presented in the sentence. We are no longer talking about two distinct periods in time, but about all the time that passed between them, enough time to allow the reputation of Ossian to grow. The same problem from (A) persists with the superfluous of, however. There is simply no way to justify its inclusion. Finally, an ambiguous logical disconnect occurs at the tail-end of the sentence by (once again) shifting the position of so. That is, by using so as a conjunction to join two independent clauses, the sentence now outlines a causal relationship, only this one does not quite add up in a clearcut manner:

1) the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard
2) so he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace

Did you catch it? The issue is subtle, but you should be wondering, What does admiring poems have to do with commissioning paintings to be hung? Paintings of what? I did not mark the conjunction in red because so is grammatically sound. But in terms of conveyed meaning, this sentence is unclear. It could mean the same as what the original sentence lays out, but it could also be presenting two separate pieces of information and be tying them together clumsily with so. All things considered, this cannot be our answer.

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(D) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
There is nothing new here to discuss, in terms of the problematic elements that allow us to eliminate this answer choice. All that I will add is that the correct idiom so _____ that appears at the end of the underlined portion. Sometimes you can lean on wrong answers to point you in the right direction, so do not be too quick to completely write off an answer choice.

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(E) had become as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
All the issues from earlier have been fixed. Became has morphed into had become; the comparison drops the unnecessary of and does not include the general himself; the so _____ that idiom is correctly employed; and, most importantly, the meaning of the sentence is clear: Napoleon admired the poems of Ossian so much that he, the general, commissioned two paintings, presumably of the bard instead of poems, to be hung in his summer palace. This is the best answer of the lot.

I hope you enjoyed this one. As always, good luck with your studies.

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@AndrewN- very good explanation.. liked that you are talking about all the issues in all the statements..
sometimes we mark the issues based on what we feel is wrong with the sentences and we don’t find that in the official explanation. This actually creates doubt that if the reasons by which we have rejected any option are even correct or not..

I really appreciate you taking time to answer all the issues in the sentences.. Thank you!

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@AndrewN- very good explanation.. liked that you are talking about all the issues in all the statements..
sometimes we mark the issues based on what we feel is wrong with the sentences and we don’t find that in the official explanation. This actually creates doubt that if the reasons by which we have rejected any option are even correct or not..

I really appreciate you taking time to answer all the issues in the sentences.. Thank you!

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Thank you, dushyanta. I am glad to see that someone appreciates my work. Since my goal is to help others with their GMAT™ preparation, I aim to put a finger, in my responses, on exactly what causes me to go against or support an answer, and one thing I know about myself is that I am detail-oriented. Still, if there is anything you would like me to address in some question, feel free to call my attention to the issue. I am pretty good about providing a prompt reply.

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OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

Happy fourth... day of the competition, that is. We have another SC question before us; so far, these have proved devilishly difficult for the group on the whole. I did not write the questions with trickery in mind. Rather, I was hoping to craft engaging sentences that provided not just one, but a few talking points, the way a real GMAT™ question does. Are you ready to get to the bottom of another one?

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By the eighteenth century, Ossian, a legendary Scottish poet and storyteller from the third century, became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace.

(A) became as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard to where
Right out of the gates, we encounter a crucial part of the sentence, and the simple past became does not agree with the surrounding contextual clues, namely the opening phrase, which references the eighteenth century through a progressive by instead of a moment-in-time in, and the appositive phrase, which tells us that Ossian lived in the third century. That is, we find it difficult to resolve such conflicting temporal information without pausing—someone from the third century became celebrated by the eighteenth, fifteen hundred years later.

The second part of the original sentence that is off is the inclusion of of within a comparison, one that follows a basic as _____ a [noun 1] as [noun 2]. Sure, native speakers sometimes speak this way, so the sound test might not work against this one (not that you should be using such a method to eliminate answers), but of is a completely superfluous and unidiomatic element.

Finally, the degree to which Napoleon admired the poems also follows a certain idiomatic construct: so _____ that. Again, some people in casual conversation might indicate the extent of something by dropping in to where, but that will not fly here.

With three compelling reasons to eliminate (A), we can safely check for better answers ahead.

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(B) became as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who admired the poems of the Scottish bard so that
The first issue is no different from before, but the second is where things get interesting. Notice that Homer and Dante are now mentioned as literary figures one and two in a series that ends with the French general Napoleon Bonaparte. A knowledge of history is not required to ascertain whether Napoleon was a revered and mythical poet: he is described as a general instead (not a warrior poet either, for you fans of Braveheart out there). This is a serious distortion of the logical meaning of the sentence, one that cannot be overlooked. Just in case you missed that one, though, there is a third issue that we can use to argue against (B). By moving so, the extent-to-which marker turns into an explanatory marker instead, and who admired... so that is not a correct way to express that the general admired some poems to the extent that he ordered something. One, two, three strikes you're out.

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(C) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard, so
First off, notice that the issue with became has now been rectified with a past perfect had become. The change correctly bridges the time gap between the third and eighteenth centuries, as presented in the sentence. We are no longer talking about two distinct periods in time, but about all the time that passed between them, enough time to allow the reputation of Ossian to grow. The same problem from (A) persists with the superfluous of, however. There is simply no way to justify its inclusion. Finally, an ambiguous logical disconnect occurs at the tail-end of the sentence by (once again) shifting the position of so. That is, by using so as a conjunction to join two independent clauses, the sentence now outlines a causal relationship, only this one does not quite add up in a clearcut manner:

1) the French general Napoleon Bonaparte admired the poems of the Scottish bard
2) so he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace

Did you catch it? The issue is subtle, but you should be wondering, What does admiring poems have to do with commissioning paintings to be hung? Paintings of what? I did not mark the conjunction in red because so is grammatically sound. But in terms of conveyed meaning, this sentence is unclear. It could mean the same as what the original sentence lays out, but it could also be presenting two separate pieces of information and be tying them together clumsily with so. All things considered, this cannot be our answer.

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(D) had become as revered and mythical of a literary figure as Homer, Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte, who so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
There is nothing new here to discuss, in terms of the problematic elements that allow us to eliminate this answer choice. All that I will add is that the correct idiom so _____ that appears at the end of the underlined portion. Sometimes you can lean on wrong answers to point you in the right direction, so do not be too quick to completely write off an answer choice.

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(E) had become as revered and mythical a literary figure as Homer or Dante, and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that
All the issues from earlier have been fixed. Became has morphed into had become; the comparison drops the unnecessary of and does not include the general himself; the so _____ that idiom is correctly employed; and, most importantly, the meaning of the sentence is clear: Napoleon admired the poems of Ossian so much that he, the general, commissioned two paintings, presumably of the bard instead of poems, to be hung in his summer palace. This is the best answer of the lot.

I hope you enjoyed this one. As always, good luck with your studies.

- Andrew

Hi,

Please help me understand this question.

Where is a verb for "and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace." ??

[In case that admire is a verb]
Can we use "Napoleon so admire that ...." ??

Now I am very confuse :dazed :dazed :dazed
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Hi,

Please help me understand this question.

Where is a verb for "and the French general Napoleon Bonaparte so admired the poems of the Scottish bard that he commissioned two paintings to be hung in his summer palace." ??

[In case that admire is a verb]
Can we use "Napoleon so admire that ...." ??

Now I am very confuse :dazed :dazed :dazed
Hello, Jumps. The verb of the second independent clause is indeed admired. This sort of inverted structure can be used with adverbs such as so when they are followed by an object. Compare the following versions of the sentence:

1) Napoleon so admired the poems that...
[subject] + [adverb] + [verb] + [object]

2) Napoleon admired the poems so much that...
[subject] + [verb] + [object] + [adverb]

You might wonder about the sudden appearance of much in sentence 2 (or its absence in sentence 1). That is really a matter of convention, which is to say that there is no convincing answer. The language has simply passed down to us these types of sentences to convey the same meaning.

I hope that helps. Thank you for thinking to ask about the question.

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