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A book by Jim Collins, an American management writer, prompted Akio Toyoda’s alarm call last month by reading “How the Mighty Fall”, which identifies five stages of corporate decline. A)A book by Jim Collins, an American management writer, prompted Akio Toyoda’s alarm call last month by reading “How the Mighty Fall”, which identifies five stages of corporate decline.
this is so terribly constructed...my eyes hurt... which refers to what???
B)Akio Toyoda’s alarm call last month was prompted by reading “How the Mighty Fall”, a book which identifies five stages of corporate decline and is written by Jim Collins, an American management writer.
now which refers to a book. and correctly joins 2 verbs together. all modifiers are in place and the meaning is clear.
C)Akio Toyoda alarm call last month was prompted by reading “How the Mighty Fall”, books which identify five stages of corporate decline and was written by Jim Collins, an American management writer.
AK's alarm - 1st error. books-was - incorrect as there is only 1 book that prompted AT's alarm, but the subject and the first verb are plural.
D)“How the Mighty Fall”, a book by Jim Collins, an American management writer, prompted Akio Toyoda’s alarm call last month, identifying five stages of corporate decline.
ing modifier changes the meaning.
E) Jim Collins, an American management writer, wrote “How the Mighty Fall”, which identifies five stages of corporate decline, prompting Akio Toyoda’s alarm call last month by reading.
again, ing modifier changes the meaning.