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Although new farm subsidy legislation is presently being considered in the House of representatives,significant revision is to be expected if it is to be passed.

Reduces to : Although New Legislation is being considered,................................. ( Now what should follow logically ?)

Scanning the options :

D) it is not expected to be passed .....................

E) it is not expected to pass ................................

Guess Nothing is wrong gramatically bxn B & E : lets remove the NOT n recheck :

1. SKM is.............expected to score Q 51..................

2. SKM is ............expected to be scored Q 51..............

If one is forced to choose bxn the 2 = guess 1 ( Concisely conveys the intent ) ; So CONCISION wins

Leading to E , my take
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Also is passive construction always a no no in GMAT sentence correction questions or only when there is a better option available? In what all cases can we use passive construction?

The correct option: "it is not expected ..........revision" is an independent clause. Can an independent clause be correct if it starts with a pronoun as there will be no antecedent in that clause for that pronoun? Especially when a sentence starts with a possessive pronoun.


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Although new farm subsidy legislation is presently being considered in the House of Representatives, significant revision is to be expected if it is to be passed.


A. significant revision is to be expected if it is to be passed.

B. they do not expect it passing without significant revision.

C. they do not expect it passing without it being significantly revised.

D. it is not expected to be passed without being significantly revised.

E. it is not expected to pass without significant revision.


Very confused between D and E. The second clause is in passive, it is not expected.... and thus the infinitive should be used in passive form - to be passed. No?

Experts, please help...thanks!


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The underlined portion of the sentence contains two passive constructions: is to be expected and is to be passed. Since we don't know who expects significant revision to be necessary, we can't eliminate the passive voice entirely unless we add a subject. (C) tries to do this but there's no indication in the original sentence that "farmers" are doing the expecting, and the final will be passed is the wrong tense for a phrase beginning with if in this context. (B) also adds a subject, but they is grammatically incorrect here since we have no idea who they might be. Of the remaining choices, none is grammatically incorrect, but (A) and (D) have two passive constructions while (E) only has one. The stylistic superiority of (E), plus the fact that it is grammatically correct, makes (E) the right answer.
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Before approaching the question, lets keep the following in mind:
1. 'Although' generally means there would be a certain condition for certain action to happen.
2. The said condition would appear after a coma in the sentence.
3. The voice before and after the coma should be the same i.e. either both active or both passive preferably an active voice.
4. there should be word (noun or pronoun) just after the coma which means the subject.

Now the eliminations:
1. Since the subject - '.... legislation' is one legislation i.e. it is singular, we may eliminate all the plural pronouns.
Hence, B & C is eliminated.
2. Now the word just after the coma should mean the subject i.e. the said legislation. Now, A directly starts with 'significant revision...' which clearly does not mean the subject. Hence A is eliminated too.
3. Between D&E, D has a passive voice after without while E does not which also breaks the uniformity of sentence formation. Hence, D is eliminated too.
4. E is the correct answer.
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