Because there are results of a study of the drug newly approved for reducing elevated cholesterol levels that indicate it can cause problems with the kidneys and other organs, they have caused regulators to require that it now be dispensed with an additional warning on the label.
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A. Because there are results of a study of the drug newly approved for reducing elevated cholesterol levels that indicate it can cause problems with the kidneys and other organs, they have caused regulators to require that it now be dispensed
Because there are results .....
they (results) have caused regulators to require? Steaming hot crap!
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B. Because a study's results indicate that the drug newly approved for reducing elevated cholesterol levels can cause problems with the kidneys and other organs, regulators require that the drug now be dispensed
Because a study's results indicate....x y z, regulators require ... a b c. Nice and clear. Conveys the intended meaning perfectly.
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C. The newly approved drug for reducing elevated cholesterol levels can cause problems with the kidneys and other organs, as indicated to regulators by the results of a study, so it is now required to be dispensed
so it is now required in the end makes the action of putting additional label independent of regulators. This is not the intended meaning. Regulators are the authority here. Incorrect.
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D. Based on the results of a study, the drug newly approved for reducing elevated cholesterol levels can cause problems with the kidneys and other organs, so regulators require it to be dispensed now
Based on the results seems to be modifying
the drug.. This is wrong.
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E. Because regulators found in the results of a study that the drug newly approved for reducing elevated cholesterol levels can cause problems with the kidneys and other organs, so they are now requiring it to be dispensed
Because and
so together are redundant? Also, what's that
they are now requiring? Another steaming hot pile of crap. Reject.