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Project SC Butler: Day 237 Sentence Correction (SC1)
For SC butler Questions Click Here Either stocks or bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also are guarantees of the return of investors' principal.
A) Either stocks or bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also are guarantees of
B) Both stocks and bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also guarantee
C) Both stocks have advantages and so do bonds: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds not only can provide predictable income but also guarantee
D) Advantages are to be had from both stocks and bonds: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also guarantee
E) Both stocks and bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also can guarantee
Meaning : Stocks and Bonds have advantages. Those are
1. stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time
2. Bonds can not only provide predictable income but also guarantee the return of investors' principal.
General info about the benefits of stocks and bonds is presented
Error: Parallelism : not only X....but also Y...
X and Y should be the parallel entities. In original choice error is
A) Either stocks or bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only
provide predictable income but also
are guarantees of
Note that use of Either ..or.. is correct and S-V pair also matches.
But the second part of the sentence (regarding bonds benefits) does'nt convey clear meaning because it is not parallel
B) Both stocks and bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also guarantee
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Correct Choice Both X and Y --> Correctly Used
Correct Use of Parallelism : bonds can not only
provide predictable income but also
guaranteeC) Both stocks have advantages and so do bonds: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds not only can provide predictable income but also guarantee
:- Both Stocks??? Original Sentence talks about Stocks and Bonds. The phrase Both Stocks have... distorts the intended meaning (as there are no 2 stocks listed in the original sentence)
D)
Advantages are to be had from both stocks and bonds: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also guarantee
:-Parallelism is correctly used in the second part but the start of the sentence is awkward.
are to be had (Original sentence provides the general information presented in the simple present tense. Use of Had is altogether wrong)
E) Both stocks and bonds have advantages: stocks can increase in value and give investors more income over time, while bonds can not only provide predictable income but also
can guarantee
:- Parallelism Error - not only X but also Y...here X and Y are not parallel. Rest of the construction of the sentence is correct
Answer B