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It could be argued that the era of modern medicine began in earnest with Louis Pasteur’s 19th-century development of a vaccine for rabies, which led to the eradication of polio, smallpox, and eventually malaria.

(A) rabies, which led to the eradication of polio, smallpox, and eventually
(B) rabies, which led to the eradication of polio and smallpox, and eventually to
(C) rabies, an event that led to the eradication of polio, smallpox, and eventually
(D) rabies and an event leading to the eradication of polio, smallpox, and eventually
(E) rabies, which has led to the eradication of polio, smallpox, and eventually to


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When you see answer choices with the restrictive "comma which" modifier, you should seize on that as a primary decision point. Here, clearly it wasn't "rabies" that led to the eradication of other diseases, and the presence of the other modifier in the answer choices ("an event") should show you that the intended meaning of the sentence is that the event (the development of the rabies vaccine) is what led to those eradication. So you can confidently eliminate A, B, and E for the modifier error.

Choice D avoids the modifier error, removing the modifier and using the conjunction "and." But that suggests that "an event leading to..." is a separate entity (one of two things Pasteur developed? A second, vague item to which we can tie the beginning of the modern medicine era?). This is incorrect, as well, leading you to answer choice C. Choice C uses a more flexible, less restrictive modifier ("an event" - appositive modifiers at the ends of sentences get a lot of leeway) to correct the problems in the other choices, and is therefore correct.
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When you see answer choices with the restrictive "comma which" modifier, you should seize on that as a primary decision point. Here, clearly it wasn't "rabies" that led to the eradication of other diseases, and the presence of the other modifier in the answer choices ("an event") should show you that the intended meaning of the sentence is that the event (the development of the rabies vaccine) is what led to those eradication. So you can confidently eliminate A, B, and E for the modifier error.

Choice D avoids the modifier error, removing the modifier and using the conjunction "and." But that suggests that "an event leading to..." is a separate entity (one of two things Pasteur developed? A second, vague item to which we can tie the beginning of the modern medicine era?). This is incorrect, as well, leading you to answer choice C. Choice C uses a more flexible, less restrictive modifier ("an event" - appositive modifiers at the ends of sentences get a lot of leeway) to correct the problems in the other choices, and is therefore correct.
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