https://www.nytimes.com/2007/07/12/business/12sbiz.htmlTo build a successful company,
entrepreneurs need to play a variety of roles — visionary, sales representative and morale builder, to name a few. But, in some cases, especially in the early years, they may need to play another, less obvious one: illusionist. That means
finding resourceful ways,
like renting temporary office space or using answering services,
to make themselves seem larger and more firmly established than they may actually be. Of course, no matter how adept their sleight-of-hand, it will not work unless they are delivering the goods.
New Entrepreneurs (A) Sentence Structure (
that); Noun-Pronoun and Noun-Noun Agreement (
company); Comparison (
large than)
(B) CORRECT (C) Sentence Structure (
thus);
(D) Sentence Structure (
so that);
(E) Noun-Noun Agreement (
company); Comparison (
large than)
First glanceThe opening word in each choice changes substantially (that, to, thus, so, of). That particular mix of words indicates possible Sentence Structure, Meaning, or Modifier issues.
Issues(1) Sentence Structure: that; thus; so thatThese differences pop out at the first glance. Check the earlier sentence structure to see what leads into these words.
The earlier sentence core is as follows: New entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways … (
that; to; thus; so that; of). The entrepreneurs are purposely taking action, so they are finding ways
to do something or
of doing something. Answers (B) and (E) are okay, but eliminate choices (A), (C), and (D).
(2) Noun-Pronoun and Noun-Noun Agreement: companyThe pronoun
they appears in the last line of the sentence. Logically,
they should refer to
companies, but the original sentence uses the singular
company. Eliminate choices (A) and (E) for faulty noun-pronoun agreement.
The original sentence also talks about a class of businessperson in general:
new entrepreneurs. These businesspeople all share certain problems that are specific to being a part of this category. In general, then, this sentence is talking about many different entrepreneurs who are starting many different companies.
The language
make their company seem, then, is illogical. This implies that all of these entrepreneurs are starting just one company together—but, logically, the different
entrepreneurs, plural, should be starting many
companies, plural. Eliminate choices (A) and (E) for faulty noun-noun agreement.
(3) Comparison: largeThe original sentence indicates that these entrepreneurs want to make their compan(ies)
seem large and more firmly established than … they are.
The sentence is trying to say that these entrepreneurs want to do two things: make the companies
seem larger than they are and make the companies
seem more firmly established than they are. The original sentence, however, says
seem large … than, not
larger than. Eliminate choices (A) and (E) for a faulty comparison structure.
The Correct AnswerCorrect answer (B) makes a proper comparison (
seem larger … than) and has proper noun-noun agreement (
entrepreneurs … find ways … to make their companies). The overall sentence structure also conveys intent:
Entrepreneurs may need to find resourceful ways to make something happen.