JonShukhrat
Dear
IanStewart and
RonPurewal,
I would be grateful if you could help better understand the problem with choice A. The OE rules out choice A for the reason that the modifier “who defeated…” is ambiguous because it may refer to Marcus Kann or Horatio Caro or both. However, I didn’t have such problem while reading it and naturally associated the modifier with Horatio Caro because a noun modifier usually modifies what is closest (especially when there is no a noun phrase), or else the sentence would be worded accordingly to mean a different thing.
Cannot the line of reasoning OE uses for ruling out A be used for ruling out OA as well?
I agree with you that the OE takes an inconsistent view of modifiers here. I think there's only one correct way to interpret the "named after" phrase in answer E, because of the comma. If the sentence meant to say that the variations were named after Caro and Kann, the comma would need to be removed:
Among the many variations of the Caro-Kann defense named after Caro and Kann are the Advance variation and the Fantasy variation.We then have "variations ... named after Caro and Kann". But when we insert a comma, the role of a comma used this way is to interrupt the sentence to immediately describe something in the sentence, so that description applies to whatever came just before the comma. So below it's specifically the "Caro-Kann defense" that was named for Caro and Kann:
Among the many variations of the Caro-Kann defense, named after Caro and Kann, are the Advance variation and the Fantasy variation.If this sentence had meant to say the variations were named for Caro and Kann, it could have removed the comma as in my first example, or it could have moved the descriptive phrase:
Among the many variations, named after Caro and Kann, of the Caro-Kann defense are the Advance variation and the Fantasy variation.Of course these rewritten sentences seem strange because it doesn't make much sense that the "Advance" and "Fantasy" variations were named for Caro or Kann.
I agree with you about the "who defeated" in answer A -- the most natural interpretation again is that it applies to what immediately precedes the interrupting comma, so it most naturally describes "Horatio Caro" alone. There's a different reason I don't like answer A here -- it talks about "the defense" as though there's some defense the sentence has previously mentioned. That's needlessly confusing when reading the sentence -- it would make more sense, if we wanted to write the sentence the way A is written, to move "The Caro-Kann defense" to the beginning:
The Caro-Kann defense, named for Kann and Caro, who defeated Mieses using the defense, has spawned... and then when we first read it, we know what the sentence is talking about when it first mentions "the defense".
I don't like the OA here too much either -- I'd prefer that it replace the redundant "the defense" with "it" near the end of the underlined portion, and I don't know what the passive word "Included" is doing at the beginning of the sentence (who is "including" the variations? The word serves no purpose here) but it's the best of the five.