Official Explanation
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
For SC butler Questions Click Here THE PROMPTQuote:
If one scored poorly on the GMAT, it could mean either that one has insufficient skills or that one underperformed because of insufficient preparation or pressure.
• Parallelism
1)
Either X Or Y In the idiomatic construction
Either X or Y, the X and Y elements must be parallel.
That is, the X and Y elements must be similar parts of speech and must play the same grammatical or logical role in the sentence.
GMAC likes to test whether you understand where to place words such as
-- prepositions
Correct: for either X or Y ↔ either for X or for Y
-- subordinating conjunctions
Correct: . . . demonstrates that either X or Y ↔ . . . demonstrates either that X or that Y
-- the first part of a "split" verb
Correct: He has either been fined or jailed. ↔ He has been either fined or jailed.
In my examples, both versions are correct.
Look at what immediately follows the X and Y terms.
Whatever follows should be parallel.
That said, I encourage you to try to see the pattern rather than follow a mechanical rule.
See whether you can create an example similar those I wrote above, in which you produce two versions of
Either X or Y, using the word
because (a subordinating conjunction) or the word
from (a preposition).
2)
A or BThis construction, too, requires that elements be parallel.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) either that one has insufficient skills or that one underperformed because of insufficient preparation or pressure.
• no error
There are two lists in this question.
1. either X or Y
2. A or B
In this answer, X and Y, and A and B, are correctly of the same part of speech in both lists:
1. either that... or that...
2. noun (preparation) . . . noun (pressure)
KEEP
Quote:
B) that either one has insufficient skills or that one underperformed because of insufficient preparation or pressure.
• not parallel
The same part of speech that follows
either must also follow
or.
Either is followed by the pronoun
one.
Or, however, is followed by the conjunction
that.
Eliminate B
Quote:
C) either that one has insufficient skills or that one underperformed because of insufficient preparation or one was under pressure.
• Not parallel
There are two lists in this question [that involve two idioms,
Either X or Y, and
A or B].
In this answer choice, the first list, constructed with Either X or Y, is correct:
either that... or that... The second list, though, is incorrect.
It is in the format of
A or B. A is a noun (
insufficient preparation) while
B is a clause (
one was under pressure).
(A clause contains a subject and a verb and is much different from a noun or noun phrase.)
Not parallel.
Eliminate C
Quote:
D) that either one has insufficient skills or that one underperformed because of insufficient preparation or not handling pressure well.
• not parallel
There are two lists in this question.
1. Either A or B
2. A or B
The first list is incorrect.
The second list is acceptable but not preferred (noun-gerund is not preferred to noun-noun).
In the first list,
either is followed by the pronoun
one while
or is followed by the conjunction
that.
In the second list, the first item is a noun (
insufficient preparation) while the second item is a [gerund phrase (not handling pressure very well)], which would be better if it were written with a dedicated noun such as "pressure."
Eliminate D
Quote:
E) either one has insufficient skills or that one underperformed because of insufficient preparation or pressure
• not parallel
The same part of speech that follows
either must also follow
or. Either is followed by the pronoun
one.
Or, though, is followed by the conjunction
that.
Eliminate E.
The answer is A. • NOTES
• The pronoun "one" - some thoughts
→ In English, if we want to talk about "a person in general" (or to connote "people in general"), we use the pronoun
one.In U.S. English, this usage is fairly rare; in the States,
one sounds stuffily formal and a bit weird.
Nonetheless, you should know that:
(1) the verb conjugation of "one" is the third person singular
→
one remembers, he remembers, she remembers →
one learns, she learns, he learns(2) GMAC may test you on
one.
→ If so, the
incorrect answers will typically contain a combination of
he or she or
you, on the one hand, and
one on the other hand.
Do not mix the pronouns.
Wrong:
If one applies for asylum in the U.S., he or she must demonstrate persecution based on one of five protected grounds, namely, race, religion, nationality, membership in a particular social group or political opinion.Correct: If
one applies for asylum in the U.S.,
one must demonstrate persecution based on one of five protected grounds, namely, race, religion, nationality, membership in a particular social group or political opinion.
Correct: If
a person applies for asylum in the U.S.,
he or she must demonstrate persecution based on one of five protected grounds, namely, race, religion, nationality, membership in a particular social group or political opinion.
Many native speakers use
you to talk about "a person/people in general," this way:
→ Informal:
For inspiration about perseverance against all odds, you should learn about Nelson Mandela.Although native U.S. speakers frequently use this construction in informal speech, avoid the construction in formal writing.
(Professional writers often get around the issue entirely and use neither
you nor
one.)
In formal English, we use
one rather than
you, this way:
→ Formal:
For inspiration about perseverance against all odds, one should learn about Nelson Mandela.Although this question does not test pronoun usage, its syntax and tone invite the use of
one, a usage that GMAC tests on occasion—so I thought I'd give you a heads up.
COMMENTSPriyamRathor , welcome to SC Butler.
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Don't worry if "your" solution has already been posted.
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Keep up the hard work, everyone.
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