Tanchat wrote:
Dear Experts,
GMATNinja AndrewN mikemcgarryI saw many people asked about A&B. Can anyone elaborate why (D) is wrong?
If (A) is correct : setting free ..... should modify "Robert Carter III stunned his family" right? the non-underlined part already have "by filling a deed of emancipation" Thus, "setting free the more than.." is another action and must be parallel with filling. Therefore, there should be "and".
In 1791 Robert Carter III, ....... , stunned his family, friends and neighbors by filling a deed of emancipation "and" setting free the more than 500 slaes who were legally considered
Then, why (A) is correct and (D) wrong?
Hello,
Tanchat. I agree with the response provided above. I will add that, in my view, the placement of the comparative
more than leads to a completely different meaning. Ignore the other elements of answer choices (A) and (D) to focus on this point for a moment.
(A) the more than 500 slaves = there were more than 500 slaves
(D) more than the 500 slaves = something
in addition to a group of 500 slaves
If I write,
The boy traded more than the 500 baseball cards in his collection, I find myself wondering the following:
- Did the boy previously own trading cards that pertained to other sports? (e.g., football, basketball, hockey)
- Did the boy trade his binder of cards, or plastic sheets or cases to hold cards, or other trading-card-related items?
- Did the boy trade video games or something else a boy might possess in addition to those baseball cards?
I cannot ignore such thoughts, since the placement of the comparative
more than forces me to make such associations. Getting back to the original sentence, at best, (D) makes me wonder why the sentence does not specify what else Robert Carter III may have set free: horses? cattle? sheep? I am not making a joke about slavery in any way, but the frame leaves much to be desired in the way of clarity:
set/setting free more than the _____ who were legally considered his propertyThis one is a lost cause, and we can abandon (D) on this consideration alone.
Thank you for thinking to ask.
- Andrew
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