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I think the answer is D as it clears the pronoun ambiguity of the second 'their'. But since it is another independent clause, wouldn't it be better separated by a ';' ?
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Most bird species sing despite lacking vocal chords, compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating and generating sound waves when air from the lungs passes over them.

Seems, all answer choices contain ambiguity of pronoun: there are three instances of "their"/"them" that refer to different antecedents.

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A) compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating
First instance of "their" presumably refers to "bird species" and the second one - to "chords". Wrong

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B) to compensate with their throat muscles and membranes by vibrating for their absence
. - same pronoun ambiguity as in A; in addition, change in meaning: original sentence uses -ING modifier to present HOW aspect: "compensating". In this answer choice, "to compensate" form means "with intention"

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C) their throat muscles and membranes being compensated for their absence when they vibrate
- "being" is acceptable as a modifier for the cases when some temporary condition is described, not the case here. So, this option is wrong.

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D) their throat muscles and membranes compensating for the absence by vibrating
- I chose D only by POE. Pronoun ambiguity is still here :(

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E) with compensation from their throat muscles and membranes for the absence that vibrates
"for the absence that vibrates" sounds funny and wrong; literally, the choice says that absence is vibrating.
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Most bird species sing despite lacking vocal chords, compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating and generating sound waves when air from the lungs passes over them.

A) compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating

B) to compensate with their throat muscles and membranes by vibrating for their absence

C) their throat muscles and membranes being compensated for their absence when they vibrate

D) their throat muscles and membranes compensating for the absence by vibrating

E) with compensation from their throat muscles and membranes for the absence that vibrates

A. 'their absence' sounds like the absence of the birds themselves. wrong choice

B. again "vibrating for their absence" who's absence? the bird's or the vocal chords'?

C. "being compensated for their absence when they vibrate" wrong. so much ambiguity makes me sad :cry:

D. ah yes an option that has clear subjects and clear pronouns. lets keep this for now

E. "for the absence that vibrates" Does anyone else has an "absence that vibrates"? nonsensical. therefore wrong.

Through POE it looks like D is the correct answer. Do point out any mistakes in my reasoning.
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Most bird species sing despite lacking vocal chords, compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating and generating sound waves when air from the lungs passes over them.

This is a tough question. There is a pronoun their that jumps all over the place in all answer choices. In medium-hard questions, one may want to carefully examine the non-underlined portions of the sentence and look for clues. In our case, we have a verb generating and connector and which follow the underlined section. We can see that something must be parallel to and generating [blah-blah].

A) compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating
I guess the first their refers to bird species. Alright. What about the second their? Vocal chords or throat muscles and membranes? Vibrating is parallel to generating, but the option is not quite great. Let's keep it for now.

B) to compensate with their throat muscles and membranes by vibrating for their absence
I would argue that the sentence turns into a run-on sentence if we plug option (B). But I do not really understand the meaning of the portion in blue...

C) their throat muscles and membranes being compensated for their absence when they vibrate
This option is just a pure nonsense. Let's think about it. Some organs are being compensated for their absence... Hm... Let's move on.

D) their throat muscles and membranes compensating for the absence by vibrating
The vibrating is parallel to generating. Their refers to bird species. Organs [throat muscles and membranes] compensate for the absence of vocal chords [how?] by vibrating and generating [blah-blah]. This option has the right to live. Also, it is better than anything else we have seen so far.

E) with compensation from their throat muscles and membranes for the absence that vibrates
Even if you accept the highlighted part, the pink remainder of this option is absurd. Absence that vibrates... How could absence vibrate? :-o
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Most bird species sing despite lacking vocal chords, compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating and generating sound waves when air from the lungs passes over them.

Meaning: Many bird species[plural] sing despite lacking vocal chords. These bird species that lack vocal chords utilize their throat muscles and membranes to compensate for the absence of vocal chords. How are they[bird species] able to use their throat muscles and membranes to compensate for the lack of vocal chords? by: 1. vibrating[with their throat muscles and membranes] and 2: generating sound waves when air from the lungs passes over them[throat muscles and membranes].

A) compensating with their throat muscles and membranes for their absence by vibrating
Let's hope I now have a full understanding of pronoun reference on the GMAT. The pronoun their should refer to the same plural noun. So, if their throat muscles and membranes refer to bird species, then their in their absence must also refer to bird species. Since their absence refers to bird species, we have a pronoun referencing error. The best way to fix the issue is to recall or create a copy of vocal chords. Eliminate option A.

B) to compensate with their throat muscles and membranes by vibrating for their absence.
Similar error in relation to pronoun reference in option A is repeated in option B. Eliminate option B as well.

C) their throat muscles and membranes being compensated for their absence when they vibrate
Same pronoun issue in option C also. Eliminate option C.

D) their throat muscles and membranes compensating for the absence[of vocal chords] by vibrating
This is correct. their rightly refer to bird species. By avoiding a pronoun to refer to vocal chords, the pronoun error is eliminated in option D, since it can be implied that the absence refers to vocal chords. In addition, vibrating is parallel to generating. Keep option D.

E) with compensation from their throat muscles and membranes for the absence that vibrates
There is a parallelism error in option E. I cannot see what is parallel to generating sound waves when air from the lungs passes over them in option E. Option E also has a meaning error as The absence that vibrates? The absence is vibrating? No, absence cannot vibrate. It is the throat muscles and membranes that vibrate. However, since that modifier (that vibrates) is an essential modifier that refers to the immediately preceding noun it can only modify the absence which is illogical. Last but not the least, that vibrates and generating sound waves ... are not parallel. Eliminate option E.

The best answer is option D.
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