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Choice E is Winner.

Area tested- Parallelism

Executives Indicated that.....and that
A,B and C is eliminated because 'that' is Unavailable.

Between D and E,

D is wrong because

1) They anticipated the increase- Wrong
They Anticipated Cyber crime to Increase- Correct.
2) Anticipated + Would- Redundant

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible- Winner
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible


(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible


This question deals with verb tense consistency. By looking at the non-underlined portion of the sentence, we can determine that it is in the past because it happened in 2018 and the verb “indicated” is also in past tense form. Let’s see which options use past tense correctly, and eliminate any that don’t:

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible
This is correct. Both anticipated and became are in the past tense.

There you have it - option E is the only one that uses consistent past tense verbs throughout!

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Pack 14, Question 5 of 5:

In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible

E , IMO
Meaning :

In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated
that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks
and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

The way the sentence is written it is not clearly conveying the meaning . .
American cybersecurity executives indicated X and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software .. The red part seems illogical meaning .

Yes yet can be correct if we say ..
They anticipated cyber-attacks to increase because company-wide intranet and software became more broadly accessible. ..


Error :
1. Meaning error as mentioned above .



(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

1. Meaning error as mentioned above .



(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

1. Meaning error as mentioned above .
2. Parallelism error . The verbs indicated and anticipate are not parallel.


(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

1. Meaning error as mentioned above .
2. Parallelism error . The verbs indicated and anticipate are not parallel.


(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible


1. With the change in sentence structure the parallelism error is now resolved from choice B and C .
2. However , with the use of the word would become it introduced a Meaning change error . With the use of the conditional verb form would become , there is an element of uncertainty ,which makes this choice incorrect .
3. Also this choice not concise .



(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible


--- Correct . This choice corrected all the error above. In this version the verb anticipated has an subject they , and the clause -- they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible---- clearly indicates that the increase in cyber-attacks is because of the company-wide intranet becoming more widely accessible.





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Well done, DasAshishAshutosh! You cracked the code on this one! We also like the clear presentation, so other students can clearly follow your thought process. Kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.


the past tense verb ''indicated'' suggests that the event being described is past event. Hence, we need to use the past tense verb form as the main tone of the passage.

Since (B) and (C) uses the present tense verb ''anticipate'', eliminate (B) and (C).

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible
- the intended meaning of the sentence is to highlight the increased cyber-attacks as a consequence of growing accessibility to intranet. To indicate such a consequence that occurs simultaneously with the cause, we need to use ''as'' to highlight the consequence that results from the cause. Since (A) does not have ''as'', (A) can be considered incorrect. Moreover, the increase in company-wide intranet is an event that needs to be presented in the present tense; however, this increase is not indicated using the word ''become'', which is not a present tense verb.

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible
- the word anticipated already indicates an event that is expected to occur in the future. So, the use of the verb form ''would become'' hand in hand with the verb ''anticipated'' can be considered as ''redundant''. Besides, the increase in cyber attacks simultaneously occurs with the increase in accessibility of company-wide intranet. So, the verb form ''would become'' (which indicates a future event) cannot be used to describe something that occurs in simultaneity (present tense)

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible - has no error. Hence, (E) is the right answer choice.

Well done, jaisonsunny77! Another great explanation - kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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Choice E is Winner.

Area tested- Parallelism

Executives Indicated that.....and that
A,B and C is eliminated because 'that' is Unavailable.

Between D and E,

D is wrong because

1) They anticipated the increase- Wrong
They Anticipated Cyber crime to Increase- Correct.
2) Anticipated + Would- Redundant

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible- Winner

Well done, thenikhilseth! We like seeing all the different approaches you've all taken with these questions - they will be very helpful to others who are also studying! Kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible


(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible


This question deals with verb tense consistency. By looking at the non-underlined portion of the sentence, we can determine that it is in the past because it happened in 2018 and the verb “indicated” is also in past tense form. Let’s see which options use past tense correctly, and eliminate any that don’t:

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible
This is correct. Both anticipated and became are in the past tense.

There you have it - option E is the only one that uses consistent past tense verbs throughout!

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Can anyone please explain the use of "that" in option "e". Its not clear to me. Also please explain is it a complete clause.
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible


(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible


This question deals with verb tense consistency. By looking at the non-underlined portion of the sentence, we can determine that it is in the past because it happened in 2018 and the verb “indicated” is also in past tense form. Let’s see which options use past tense correctly, and eliminate any that don’t:

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible
This is correct. Both anticipated and became are in the past tense.

There you have it - option E is the only one that uses consistent past tense verbs throughout!

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Option E start with "Online" whereas others and original option start with "on their internal networks". These two signify different technical aspect of impact.

THese two are different things altogether and any either of them create a significant difference in meaning. So don't you think option E loses the intended message though grammatically correct ?
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible


(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible


This question deals with verb tense consistency. By looking at the non-underlined portion of the sentence, we can determine that it is in the past because it happened in 2018 and the verb “indicated” is also in past tense form. Let’s see which options use past tense correctly, and eliminate any that don’t:

(A) on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase company-wide intranet become more broadly accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(B) on their internal networks and anticipate the increase of cyber-attacks with the broader accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(C) on their internal networks, and they anticipate more cyber-attacks to increase with the wider accessibility of company-wide intranet
This is incorrect. “Anticipate” is in the present tense and not consistent with the rest of the sentence.

(D) on their internal networks, and that they anticipated the increase of cyber-attacks as company-wide intranet would become more widely accessible
This is incorrect. Although “anticipated” is in the past tense, “become” is not.

(E) online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible
This is correct. Both anticipated and became are in the past tense.

There you have it - option E is the only one that uses consistent past tense verbs throughout!

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Option E start with "Online" whereas others and original option start with "on their internal networks". These two signify different technical aspect of impact.

THese two are different things altogether and any either of them create a significant difference in meaning. So don't you think option E loses the intended message though grammatically correct ?

Thanks for the question abhik1502!

This is why the GMAT can be tricky - there are occasionally options that are not 100% grammatically correct, but are the best option out of the 5. In this case, the other 4 options have so many problems with verb tense consistency that we need to rule them out. Option E doesn't have the same verb tense issues, so even the "error" of changing "internal networks" to "online" isn't as big of a problem.

Thankfully, this doesn't occur often on the GMAT - mainly in the more advanced questions. :)

We hope this helps!
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible.

Sorry but the "right" sentence makes absolutely no sense for me.

The executives indicated that cyber crime impacted X and that they anticipated y ...

If we omit the first part and check where the second that clause refers to we get:

The executives indicated that they anticipated y. I don't think the GMAT would let you pick this answer as a right choice.
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible.

Sorry but the "right" sentence makes absolutely no sense for me.

The executives indicated that cyber crime impacted X and that they anticipated y ...

If we omit the first part and check where the second that clause refers to we get:

The executives indicated that they anticipated y. I don't think the GMAT would let you pick this answer as a right choice.

I also thought of the same.
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible.

Sorry but the "right" sentence makes absolutely no sense for me.

The executives indicated that cyber crime impacted X and that they anticipated y ...

If we omit the first part and check where the second that clause refers to we get:

The executives indicated that they anticipated y. I don't think the GMAT would let you pick this answer as a right choice.

Can you please clarify whether the usage of THAT THEY ANTICIPATED is correct? @EMPOWERgmat
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In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible.

Sorry but the "right" sentence makes absolutely no sense for me.

The executives indicated that cyber crime impacted X and that they anticipated y ...

If we omit the first part and check where the second that clause refers to we get:

The executives indicated that they anticipated y. I don't think the GMAT would let you pick this answer as a right choice.

Can you please clarify whether the usage of THAT THEY ANTICIPATED is correct? @EMPOWERgmat

Thanks for the follow-up question NischalSR and robinbjoern!

The usage of "that they anticipated" is totally fine. In fact, it creates a nice parallel structure to the previous phrase "that cybercrime impacted."

We hope that helps! Check out the official explanation in the comments for more details on how to tackle this question!
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Correct option : E

Common mistake which can normally people lead to, is attraction towards parallelism, comparasion and commonly used idioms, and ignorance of "intended meaning", "verb tense" , and "Pronoun"

which is very catchy for some in option A, such as

1. Indicated || anticipated - because the usage of (,and)
2. some idioms : usage of "that (1) and that (2)

In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries on their internal networks and anticipated cyber-attacks to increase with company-wide intranet and software that become more broadly accessible.

looking at 1st glance option (E) looks too simple to ignore, but its solves the "intended meaning", "tense sequence" and "Pronoun - they" accurately, plus parallelism and comparasion by "AS" usage

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indicated that
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they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible
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Hi EMPOWERgmatVerbal

The issue I have with option E is that it says the executives indicated that .... and that they anticipated ....

Does this mean that they indicated that they anticipated something? To me that sounded a little illogical. Is it not clearer to just say they anticipated something?
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Hi EMPOWERgmatVerbal

The issue I have with option E is that it says the executives indicated that .... and that they anticipated ....

Does this mean that they indicated that they anticipated something? To me that sounded a little illogical. Is it not clearer to just say they anticipated something?

Great question, @PrayjayM!

In option E, the executives are doing 2 separate actions. Here is what option E looks like if we add in all the non-underlined parts. I've also highlighted the 2 separate actions:

In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible.

So no, they didn't "indicate that they anticipated" something - they indicated one thing, and then anticipated something else.

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Hi EMPOWERgmatVerbal

The issue I have with option E is that it says the executives indicated that .... and that they anticipated ....

Does this mean that they indicated that they anticipated something? To me that sounded a little illogical. Is it not clearer to just say they anticipated something?

Great question, @PrayjayM!

In option E, the executives are doing 2 separate actions. Here is what option E looks like if we add in all the non-underlined parts. I've also highlighted the 2 separate actions:

In 2018, American cybersecurity executives indicated that cyber-crime impacted various industries online, and that they anticipated cyber-attacks to increase as company-wide intranet became more widely accessible.

So no, they didn't "indicate that they anticipated" something - they indicated one thing, and then anticipated something else.

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I think "that" should not come before "they anticipated" in choice E otherwise it will become "indicated that they anticipated" which is illogical. For this reason, I rejected choices D and E. Also, just 30% people have correctly attempted this ques seems to support my contention.
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