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Phillip’s grandfathers had been blacksmiths in Italy, and so, he pretended to be one, and this he did at his school’s Colonial Village Exhibition.

(A) Phillip’s grandfathers had been blacksmiths in Italy, and so, he pretended to be one, and this [no referent] he did at his school’s Colonial Village Exhibition.
GMAT does not like "this" (or "those"), determiner pronouns, to stand alone.
In addition, "this" has no antecedent. "This" refers to Phillip's playacting. No such noun referent exists in the sentence.
A pronoun cannot refer to an entire clause such as "he pretended to be one."


(B) Phillip’s grandfathers, being blacksmiths in Italy, made him pretend to be one [causality]; this he did at his school’s Colonial Village Exhibition.
Phillip's grandfathers did not make him pretend. Phillip chose to pretend.

(C) Because Phillip’s grandfathers had been blacksmiths in Italy, he pretended to be a blacksmith during the Colonial Village Exhibition, which was held at his school.

(D) Blacksmiths long ago in Italy, Phillip’s grandfathers had him pretend [causality] to be one, and this he did at his school’s Colonial Village Exhibition.
Same as B: Phillip's grandfathers did not "have" (make) him pretend to be a blacksmith. Phillip chose to pretend.

(E) At his school, during their [its] Colonial Village Exhibition, since Phillip’s grandfathers were blacksmiths in Italy, this he did too, pretending to be the same.
School is singular. Possessive pronoun should be its.
selim , Would you please specify the source?

Split #1: Causality.
Phillip decided to be a blacksmith in the exhibition
because he wanted to emulate his grandfathers, both of whom
had been blacksmiths.

Who "caused" Phillip to be a blacksmith? PHILLIP. Not his grandfathers

True, his grandfathers (or his grandfathers' history) influenced Phillip
to choose the role of blacksmith for the school's exhibition. Phillip wanted
to emulate his grandfathers in a setting from the "old days" in which he playacted.

Phillip's grandfathers, however, did not force Phillip to playact as a blacksmith.

Eliminate B and D

Split #2: Pronouns

Answer E: School is singular. Their is plural possessive. The pronoun should be its.

Answer A: "This" (and "those") should not stand alone on the GMAT.
"This" has no antecedent in the sentence.

"This" must be followed by the noun for which
it acts as a determiner (THIS color, THIS book).

In addition, "this" has no antecedent. "This" refers
to playacting, a noun that does not exist
in the sentence. Do not be tempted
by the clause "he pretended to be one." That clause is
neither a noun nor a noun phrase. Pronouns may not refer
to entire clauses such as "he pretended to be one."

Eliminate A and E

Check (C)
(C) Because Phillip’s grandfathers had been blacksmiths in Italy, he pretended to be a blacksmith during the Colonial Village Exhibition, which was held at his school.

This sentence is clear: Phillip decided to be a blacksmith
while playacting in a school exhibition because he
wanted to emulate his grandfathers, both of whom had been blacksmiths
in the "olden days."

Answer C

I have taken this question from an MBA entrance exam question paper as i was a bit confused about the official answer.

I want to preempt a non-issue, namely, "he" in option C. Let it go.. Recently, a peerless expert repeated his mantra: forget about the issue. It has never been used to solve a GMAT SC question and it has not shown up in GMAC materials in a decade.Populate your mental real estate please, with something else. If these words confuse you, do not worry. The subject is repetitive and of no help.
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selim , Would you please specify the source?
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I have taken this question from an MBA entrance exam question paper as i was a bit confused about the official answer.
Thanks for the answer!

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