Hi,
danielhtgl,
Thank you for your post!
First, I would like to say you did a great job backing a 720 in your GMAT, and belonging to a diverse pool will definitely help your case. Your overall GPA is ok. However, it would help if you could add some other academic statistics to your profile. About your profile, you have very well described your roles and did well adding about awards and accolades. However, it's also important to add stellar leadership examples, critical projects, more on promotions, and add brief details about your international exposure. Moreover, since you switched your company multiple times, could you please give strong reasons why you think it was a good time for you to switch? What were your aims & aspirations regarding your new role, and how would you say it isn't something closely related to your endurance. Finally, you would need to link your past experiences and skill-set in your diverse tenure with your post-MBA goals. For your reference, I suggest you go through our article on
How you can justify your career switch to pursue an MBA for a career change!, this would most certainly help provide insights and help you structure your profile accordingly.
Regarding your ECAs, you have some good ones, but most are related to your company responsibility or during your school times. Moreover, I find it to be a bit brief; I would suggest elaborating on the challenges faced, the leadership roles played, the impact generated, and a little bit about the overall experience. A strong overall profile is a prerequisite for a top B-school, so I recommend adding other certified courses and certifications to your profile to gain additional points.
All in all, you have a decent profile. If you increase your score by 20 points it will help you maximize your chances as you are targetinng top schools. I would also recommend focusing on profile building as a stellar profile is a must for your target schools. Also, ]adding a well-defined post-MBA goal. Furthermore, try to link your work experience, ECAs, and post-MBA goals by connecting the dots in your school essays to mesmerize the adcom! If you'd like, we are happy to hop on a call with you sometime this week to discuss your profile in length and further help you with your strategy for essays and interviews regarding MBA programs;feel free to
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Hi all, kindly need your help in assessing whether I should retake the GMAT. I’m planning to apply at R2 this year for intake of 2023
Target school: HBS, GSB, Wharton, MIT Sloan
profile: male, age 28 by time matriculation
Citizenship: Indonesia, born in small city, a double minority here (Christian and non-Javanese)
GMAT: 720 (Q49, V39), IR 8, AWA 5
GPA: graduated cum laude, 3.55 petroleum engineering in Indonesia top 1 engineering university
TOEFL: 109, all section in advance level
Work experience:
-5 mths Schlumberger Abu Dhabi
-0.5 yr in BCG jakarta as intern
-2 yrs in Strategy& Jakarta as Associate
-1.5 yrs in BCG Jakarta, joined as Asso and promoted to Senior Associate in 9 months, working across Indonesia, Kuala Lumpur, and Manila.
-currently planning to move to the first and only government tech entity in Indonesia that plans to digitalize and transform Indonesian Education
extracurricular (from recent to older)
- Recruiter for BCG Jakarta giving back program, a non-profit social driven activities
- Member of BCG SOCCOM committee, that helped to arrange all the social community activities for BCG Jakarta office
- Active member of AIDA Freediving, an extreme sport. Planning to join competition prior to applying for school
- President of Petroleum Engineering Student Batch in my university
- Head of External Division for StudentsxCEO summit Bandung
- President of student council during High School
- Senior Adviser of Flag Hoisting Troops High School
Achievement:
- Winner of PwC Innovation days 2019 during my time in Strategy&
- Winner of multiple National Oil Rig Competition in 2017
- Awardee of ITB student award
Considering that I will be moving to another company and might need some time to readjust, is it worth it to retake GMAT again? Or given that I come from Indonesia this should suffice?
Should i focus on building strong essay and gathering recommendation instead? Will my move to this government entity affect my application?
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