Bunuel
Competition Mode Question
Reporting that one of
their more debilitating setbacks has been the recent unexpected failure of the Space Telescope Imaging Spectrograph, the Hubble engineering team requested additional funding to develop more reliable instruments.
(A) their more debilitating setbacks has been the recent
(B) their more debilitating setbacks has been the recently
(C) its more debilitating setbacks is the recent
(D) its more debilitating setbacks had been the recent
(E) its more debilitating setbacks had been the recently
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
There are two grammatical mistakes in this sentence, one concerning the possessive pronoun "their" and one concerning the improper tense in the phrase "has been."
A good idea whenever you run into possessive pronouns like “its” or “their” is to ask to what antecedent the “its”/”their” refers. In this case, their refers to the Hubble engineering team, which is a collective noun that is grammatically singular even though it refers to a group of people. Thus, the correct pronoun should be its rather than their. This first correction narrows our answer choices down to C, D, and E.
Answer choice C is different from D and E in its use of the verb is rather than had been. When two actions take place in the past, the perfect past tense had + [past-tense verb] is used to describe the action that was completed before another past event took place (which takes the simple past). Consider the sentence "It had been raining all day, so Liz finally opened her umbrella." In this case, the Space Telescope Imaging Spectrograph failed before the engineering team requested more funds, so both the original has been and the present tense verb is in choice C would be incorrect in this case. Thus, we’ll use had been, which corresponds to answer choices D and E.
The difference between D and E is the use of the original adjective recent (D) versus the adverb recently (E). Because this word describes the noun failure and not the adjective unexpected, and failure is a noun, recent is the better option (remember, adjectives describe nouns).
Thus, the correct answer choice is D, which corrects both the possessive pronoun and the verb tense error and keeps the correct adjective, recent.