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Some fear that the New Ethics Policy will lead to increasing government
spending, as well as increasing the threat of bureaucracy
, a flurry of new
employees, and a decline in productivity.

(A) increasing government spending, as well as increasing the threat of
bureaucracy,
(B) an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy,
(C) an increasing of government spending along with the threat of bureaucracy,
(D) government spending being increased, along with the threat of
bureaucracy,
(E) government spending and the threat of bureaucracy being increased,
with

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D & E out cos of 'being' - most likely wrong.
A out cos of 'as well as'.
C out cos of 'along with' - no need
B - 'and' is best.
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good qn though initially i went with A..but agreed with B.
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is "increasing of" right idiom?
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Dont u think that after "to" , we have to use "increase" and not the "ing" form ..
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Is this sentence "Will lead to an increasing of government funding" correct?
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didn't think an increasing of is the right idiom :(
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D and E eliminated because of 'being'.

A eliminated because of the usage of As well as. Can use and instead.

I feel C changes the meaning. There is an increase in government spending but no mention of an increase in threat of .......

B is the correct. Parallel because
an increasing of ........ and (an increasing of) ..............
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'lead to an increasing of government funding' - sounds awkward!
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I was stuck between B and C.

Original sentence states that there are an increasing government spending and an increasing threat of bureaucracy.
(B) an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy - clearly states that both government spending and threat are increasing.
(C) an increasing of government spending along with the threat of bureaucracy - merely states that government spending is increasing but not the threat of bureaucracy.
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An increasing of X and Y, a flurry of new employees, and a decline in productivity.

Now my question is how how a flurry of new employees, and a decline in productivity is parallel to X and Y? Also, do the phrase- a flurry of new employees, and a decline in productivity modify an increasing of X and Y.
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Some fear that the New Ethics Policy will lead to increasing government
spending, as well as increasing the threat of bureaucracy
, a flurry of new
employees, and a decline in productivity.

(A) increasing government spending, as well as increasing the threat of
bureaucracy,
(B) an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy,
(C) an increasing of government spending along with the threat of bureaucracy,
(D) government spending being increased, along with the threat of
bureaucracy,
(E) government spending and the threat of bureaucracy being increased,
with

I don't agree with the OA. The OA should be "C". The original sentence uses "as well as" --> This means that the stress is not on the threat of bureaucracy. Option B and C are both grammatically correct, so option C should be the correct answer since "along with" duplicates "as well as".

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Some fear that the New Ethics Policy will lead to increasing government
spending, as well as increasing the threat of bureaucracy
, a flurry of new
employees, and a decline in productivity.

(A) increasing government spending, as well as increasing the threat of
bureaucracy,
(B) an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy,
(C) an increasing of government spending along with the threat of bureaucracy,
(D) government spending being increased, along with the threat of
bureaucracy,
(E) government spending and the threat of bureaucracy being increased,
with

I don't agree with the OA. The OA should be "C". The original sentence uses "as well as" --> This means that the stress is not on the threat of bureaucracy. Option B and C are both grammatically correct, so option C should be the correct answer since "along with" duplicates "as well as".

daagh, any comments on this?

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Hi, can you kindly explain me the structure in option B? To me C looks correct both grammatically and meaning-wise. I am having a hard time to understand how B is even grammatically correct?
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Some fear that the New Ethics Policy will lead to increasing government
spending, as well as increasing the threat of bureaucracy
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employees, and a decline in productivity.

(A) increasing government spending, as well as increasing the threat of
bureaucracy,
(B) an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy,
(C) an increasing of government spending along with the threat of bureaucracy,
(D) government spending being increased, along with the threat of
bureaucracy,
(E) government spending and the threat of bureaucracy being increased,
with

I don't agree with the OA. The OA should be "C". The original sentence uses "as well as" --> This means that the stress is not on the threat of bureaucracy. Option B and C are both grammatically correct, so option C should be the correct answer since "along with" duplicates "as well as".

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Hi, can you kindly explain me the structure in option B? To me C looks correct both grammatically and meaning-wise. I am having a hard time to understand how B is even grammatically correct?

Hi Sunny,

The question states that ethics policy will lead to:
1. increasing government spending, as well as increasing the threat of bureaucracy,
2. a flurry of new employees,
3. a decline in productivity.

The options should be parallel to each other. Since 2 and 3 have an article at their beginning, 1 should also have an article at its beginning.
So only option B and C qualify as the contenders, since they both use "an".

B changes the meaning of the original sentence. So I am not quiet sure as to why the OA is B. It should be C.

Hope that helps.
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Hello GMATNinja,

1. Is the usage of "increasing of" correct in this sentence? I am skeptical about this usage.
2. Shouldn't answer be C, since "along with" duplicates "as well as" - both concentrate on the first item in the list - and "and" changes the meaning entirely, concentrating equally on both the items in the list.

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Some fear that the New Ethics Policy will lead to increasing government
spending, as well as increasing the threat of bureaucracy
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(A) increasing government spending, as well as increasing the threat of
bureaucracy,
(B) an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy,
(C) an increasing of government spending along with the threat of bureaucracy,
(D) government spending being increased, along with the threat of
bureaucracy,
(E) government spending and the threat of bureaucracy being increased,
with

I don't agree with the OA. The OA should be "C". The original sentence uses "as well as" --> This means that the stress is not on the threat of bureaucracy. Option B and C are both grammatically correct, so option C should be the correct answer since "along with" duplicates "as well as".

daagh, any comments on this?

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Hi, can you kindly explain me the structure in option B? To me C looks correct both grammatically and meaning-wise. I am having a hard time to understand how B is even grammatically correct?

I assume the sentence has the structure X,Y, and Z. Here X= an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy Y= a flurry of new
employees Z=a decline in productivity.I Notice that there is a comma before Z(, and a decline). Here X ( an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy)is convoluted. Note that there is no comma before and (an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy).
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I assume the sentence has the structure X,Y, and Z. Here X= an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy Y= a flurry of new
employees Z=a decline in productivity.I Notice that there is a comma before Z(, and a decline). Here X ( an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy)is convoluted. Note that there is no comma before and (an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy).

Sorry, I didn't understand your question.

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I assume the sentence has the structure X,Y, and Z. Here X= an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy Y= a flurry of new
employees Z=a decline in productivity.I Notice that there is a comma before Z(, and a decline). Here X ( an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy)is convoluted. Note that there is no comma before and (an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy).

Sorry, I didn't understand your question.

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Hey, I was explaining option B that reads as below-
Some fear that the New Ethics Policy will lead to an increasing of government spending and the threat of bureaucracy, , a flurry of new
employees, and a decline in productivity.
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