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in such cases, it has to be either the subject or the entire clause?

Not either or...there is an and relationship.

Such present participial phrases modify the subject of the preceding clause and have to present a result/describe the previous clause.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses Present Participial Phrase, its application and examples in significant detail. If you or someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.
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Option B: The participial modifier ‘growing’ modifies the subject of the preceding clause i.e. the 32 species. This is incorrect. ‘Growing’ and ‘famous’ are not parallel. Also, ‘as big as 30 ft long is redundant and incorrect depending on the way you look at it. Eliminate.

Option C: The same reason as B. the modifier should qualify ‘killer whale’. Usage of ‘being’ can be considered redundant. The sentence means the same without ‘being’. Eliminate.

Option D: The verb 'includes' should be 'include' as '32 species of dolphin' is plural. "as BIG as 30 ft LONG" is redundant and incorrect. Eliminate.

Option E: Same reason as D. SVA issue. In this option, the introduction of ‘and it is’ breaks the parallelism. Eliminate.

Now let’s come back to Option A.

Option A
maintains parallelism and the Subject and Verb are in agreement. This is the best choice.

Hope this helps!
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Here's my explanation of this question. Definitely, there's some good theory of modifiers that could be applied.





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Please can someone do a full breakdown of each choice and why it is wrong?
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Please can someone do a full breakdown of each choice and why it is wrong?

This question serves up two unusually juicy decision points:

First, you have a choice between "include" and "includes." If we strip out some of the modifiers, the main clause becomes:

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The 32 species are closely related to whales and in fact include/includes...

As others have noted, the subject "the 32 species" is plural, so we need the verb "include." Any answer choice with "includes" is out -- that kills (D) and (E).

Next, you have a choice between "which" and "growing." "Which" must describe a noun or noun phrase.

And anytime you have the construction "CLAUSE + COMMA + -ING," the -ING modifier will describe the entire previous clause.

Take another look at (A):

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The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.

Here, "which" seems to modify to the "killer whale." That makes sense: the whale can grow to 30 feet long. Keep (A).

In (B) we have:

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The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long.

Because "growing" must modify the entire previous clause, it sounds as though: 1) the 32 species that make up the dolphin family -- rather than the killer whale -- are growing up to 30 feet long, and 2) this growth is somehow a consequence of being related to whales. This is nonsense. Families of dolphins don't grow to 30 feet long, and even if they did, it wouldn't be because they're related to whales.

Because the use of "growing" is incoherent here, we can eliminate (B). (C) has the exact same problem, so that's out too.

We're left with (A), which is our winner.

I hope that helps!
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How does the parellelism work here? Isnt "which" only parallel to another "which"?
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How does the parellelism work here? Isnt "which" only parallel to another "which"?

Hi randarth, the parallelism here is between can and is.

Of course, following would not have been incorrect either:

....killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and which is....

You might want to go thru this post to understand how/when GMAT typically repeats relative pronouns (which/that etc.)
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A. the killer whale, (relative pronoun)which can grow to be 30 feet long and (verb)is

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Can someone explain that why is it not a parallelism error? Shouldn't be like this "the killer whale, (relative pronoun)which can grow to be 30 feet long and (relative pronoun)which is" as relative pronouns should come also after conjunction.

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A. the killer whale, (relative pronoun)which can grow to be 30 feet long and (verb)is

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Can someone explain that why is it not a parallelism error? Shouldn't be like this "the killer whale, (relative pronoun)which can grow to be 30 feet long and (relative pronoun)which is" as relative pronouns should come also after conjunction.

Hi Adambhau, thanks for tagging me on this.

Let's start with an easy example:

Peter is a person who is tall and handsome.

The above sentence is a perfectly valid sentence. Parallelism is between tall and handsome (both of them adjectives)

We don't necessarily need to say:

Peter is a person who is tall and who is handsome.

The above sentence is also valid, though slightly longer. Parallelism is obviously between who and who (both of them relative pronouns).

Hope it is clear that repetition of a relative pronoun after the conjunction is not a question of parallelism but of preference & clarity. Please refer to this response, wherein I address this issue of repeating a relative pronoun.
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The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.

Here is my approach:
32 species is plural noun because non underline mentioned "are"

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(D) includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is

(E) includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is


Hence D and E are out

Quote:
(B) include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and

(C) include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being

for B and C; "growing incorrectly modifies 32 species, rather than killer whale"

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(A) include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is


Hence correct ans is A
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How does one identify when to repeat "which" for the second part of the sentence (before "is famous") as in

include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and WHICH is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.

I know it's not repeated in the answer for this question. Is it because it's implied to repeat? Any advice would be appreciated. Thanks!
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How does one identify when to repeat "which" for the second part of the sentence (before "is famous")

Hi daprince, you might want to go thru this post on when to repeat which/that.
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The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.


(C) include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being



(C) include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being

Is "growing up to 30 feet long" redundant? egmat EducationAisle
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is it correct way to say "which can grow to be 30 feet long"?
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The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.

if I remove red font to understand include refers to "The 32 species".
The 32 species .... include the animal known as the killer whale,

my doubt is The 32 species is singular or plural, I think it is singular because of definite article "The". if this is the case then includes should be used.
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The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.

if I remove red font to understand include refers to "The 32 species".
The 32 species .... include the animal known as the killer whale,

my doubt is The 32 species is singular or plural, I think it is singular because of definite article "The". if this is the case then includes should be used.
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tramobile, the sentence already tells you that The 32 Species is plural. Notice the part that says - The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely....". Also, 32 species has to be plural.

The presence of "The" does not dictate whether a noun is plural or singular. Some very basic examples that you can relate to -
1. The girls in my class ARE extremely smart.
2. The Eiffel Tower IS the best thing I've ever seen.
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can someone explain the correctness of the idiomatic phrases "can grow to be 30 feet long" vs. "can grow upto 30ft"
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Why here '' include'' need to refer to the thirty-two species as its subject? Why we can't use''includes'' to refer to the subject ''whale'' which is singular. I have observed that verb may not always follow the preceding subject in the same sequence. In some cases of inverted sentence construction verb subject follows the verb.

Is it mandatory that SUBJECT-VERB sequence is the only, correct way?

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