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My answer is (D). It took me 57 seconds.

(A) The sentence structure is sound. This version is equivalent to
Having increased the number of teachers in the school, the principal is being accused of maintaining a poor ratio of students to teachers.
So, what is wrong with this sentence? I kept it until I saw (D).
With the benefit of a better version, I put forward two pet peeves against (A)
1. "is still being" is better than "is being" to indicate somewhat incongruous / ironic contrast between two actions.
2. To better show the contrast (and allow readers to expect it), an "although" clause is better than a principle phrase, which is more apt in scenarios without the contrast. For example:
Having increased the number of teachers in the school, the principal successfully brought the ratio of students to teachers down to be in full compliance with the new legislation.

(B) This version suggests that two actions ("increase" and "be accused") occur not only at the same time, but also continuously nonstop. It is highly unlikely to be the case.
Also, I would put comma around "however".

(C) Not a sentence. After a subordinate clause (Although the principal has begun to increase the number of teachers in the school), there is no subject for the main clause.

(E) Use either "Although" or "Yet", but not both.
1 We can dismiss such usage as redundancy.
2 "Although" is used in a complex sentence to introduce a dependent clause, but "Yet" is used in a coordinate / compound sentence. They are not compatible with each other (if they are the only constituents of a sentence).
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