OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
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The twenty-four biochemical labs in the state all compete for shares of the same government allotment, and so all strive to present their case for funding more successfully than each other.
A) all strive to present their case for funding more successfully than each other
B) all strive more successfully to present their own case for funding than the others
C) each strives to present their case for funding more successfully than one other
D) each strives to present its case for funding more successfully than the others
E) each strives successfully to present its case for funding than another
MAGOOSH OFFICIAL EXPLANATION[My slight edits and comments are in brackets.]
Split #1: to have a comparison with the word
than, we need a comparative [word such as
more in the sentence.]
Choice (E) uses no comparative, so it is wrong.
Split #2: [each other, another, all others] Think about the competition.
If I am in one lab, I want my lab to be more successful than whom?
(A) "each other" — no, this is not the "each other"/"one another" case.
[We use
each other to describe situations in which two actors are dealing with each other.
If more than two actors interact, we use
one another.]
(B) & (D) "the others" - maybe
(C) "one other team" - no, a lab wants to beat all others, not just one other
Choices (A) & (C) are incorrect.
Split #3: Pronoun-antecedent agreement in the underlined section.
(A) "all ... their" -- both plural = correct
(B) "all ... their" -- both plural = correct
(C) "each ... their" -- singular/ plural = incorrect
(D) "each ... its" -- both singular = correct
[(E) "each ... its" -- both singular = correct]
Choice (C) is incorrect.
Split #4: as mentioned above, think about the logic of the situation.
Each lab wants something unique: they want their own lab, and no other lab, to be the most successful.
In this sense, each lab wants a different outcome, so we can[not] lump them all together in a plural subject.
[In essence, we want to use "each" in order to stress that each lab is pitted against all others.]
The plural
all is logically incorrect: we need the singular
each.
Choices (A) & (B) are incorrect.
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Split #5: Placement of the modifier "more successfully."
Each lab is striving to
present its case for funding more successfully than the others.
In options B and E,
more successfully seems to modify
striving rather than
present its case for funding.
More successfully should come after we know what each lab strives for.
Options B and E are incorrect.]
Because of these splits,
choice (D) is the only possible answer.COMMENTSMorallyDeficient and
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