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While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

(A) cost associated with
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While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

A. cost associated with

B. costs associated with

C. costs arising from

D. cost of

E. costs of

Idiom : associate with. Between A and B ,why A is wrong? "cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment ",with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff " are plural. It agrees with verb "are"


Piyatiwari alluded to this in his post, but just to clarify we choose "associated with" not because of any idiom issues. "Costs arising from" and "Costs of" are both idiomatically correct, and in fact "costs of" is even more concise than "costs associated with"!

What makes the difference here is parallelism. We're discussing the costs in two categories: "data-processing equipment" and "development and maintenance of ..." Since the sentence has "and with the development and maintenance ..." we should choose (B) because it is most parallel.

My take? Idioms are difficult (and rare), so think first about other issues.

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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   14 Feb 2010, 19:18
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Hey All,

We often teach this question in class, so I thought I'd weigh in briefly.

There are two major splits here, the first is subject-verb agreement. You can always recognize this by singular/plural split in either a verb or a noun (singular/verb split in noun can also be a pronoun issue...by the way).

Your technique when faced with something like this should always be to IMMEDIATELY go looking for the verb. In this case, the verb is "are", all the way at the bottom of sentence. This means we need a plural subject: costs. (I'm not sure why some people think cost is plural and costs is singular--with rare exceptions, "s" makes plurality).

From there, we have a split between prepositions (with, of, from). All of these forms are inherently correct, in that costs can "arise from" something, or "be associated with" something, or just be "of" (costs of doing business, for example). The key is parallelism.

When you see the parallelism trigger "and", notice that the word that comes after it is WITH. This means we need to have a "with" in the first portion of the parallelism. You wouldn't want to say "costs associated with BLAH and arising from BLAH" or "costs associated with BLAH and of BLAH". Neither of those would be parallel.

These two splits get us to the correct answer: B.

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At the end of the sentence you can see the verb "are" - it means that plural noun "costs" should be used.


Right answer is (B), because of parallelism

the costs associated with ...... and with ......... are prohibitive.
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   27 Aug 2012, 04:01
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While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

A. cost associated with

B. costs associated with

C. costs arising from

D. cost of

E. costs of

Idiom : associate with. Between A and B ,why A is wrong? "cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment ",with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff " are plural. It agrees with verb "are"



While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and communitybanks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staffare prohibitive.

Thus from the reduced stem you can easily pair up the Subject & verb :

Verb ( ARE = Plural ) --------------- Subject should be COSTS (Plural)

Leading to B
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   08 May 2013, 19:25
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While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

A. cost associated with
B. costs associated with
C. costs arising from
D. cost of
E. costs of

I know that the OA is correct because of parallelism. But my doubt is this:
If we choose C or E, we would be changing the intended meaning of the original sentence, right? Even the meaning in C and E could be ilogical.
Please confirm.

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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   08 May 2013, 19:59
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Please elaborate. Pl explain how the meaning gets changed. The single most factor is that the some costs are too prohibitive for the small banks, while those costs are bearable for large banks. How this theme gets distorted from what you perceive as the intended meaning of the original by using a different preposition such as 'from' or 'of'?
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   13 May 2013, 11:28
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Why costs - plural subject ?

associated is the verb right ? So why not cost ?

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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   13 May 2013, 11:44
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Why costs - plural subject ?

associated is the verb right ? So why not cost ?

Thanks in advance.


Hi vigneshceg, the word "costs" is plural because it goes with the verb "are" at the end. The costs associated with (being the greatest student in the world and a gentleman and scholar and bla bla bla) are very high. Everything within the parentheses is irrelevant and can be ignored. Your goal in this type of question is to find the verb outside the underlined portion and get the subject within the underlined portion to agree with it (singular/singular or plural/plural)

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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   17 Dec 2016, 00:28
MarkSullivan wrote:
TomB wrote:
While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

A. cost associated with

B. costs associated with

C. costs arising from

D. cost of

E. costs of

Idiom : associate with. Between A and B ,why A is wrong? "cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment ",with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff " are plural. It agrees with verb "are"


Piyatiwari alluded to this in his post, but just to clarify we choose "associated with" not because of any idiom issues. "Costs arising from" and "Costs of" are both idiomatically correct, and in fact "costs of" is even more concise than "costs associated with"!

What makes the difference here is parallelism. We're discussing the costs in two categories: "data-processing equipment" and "development and maintenance of ..." Since the sentence has "and with the development and maintenance ..." we should choose (B) because it is most parallel.

My take? Idioms are difficult (and rare), so think first about other issues.

Cheers,
Mark

sir, i have a doubt regarding subject verb agreement if we took the costs associated then associated will be its verb and then are in this sentence make it incorrect please clearify
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   17 Dec 2016, 09:35
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MarkSullivan wrote:
TomB wrote:
While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

A. cost associated with

B. costs associated with

C. costs arising from

D. cost of

E. costs of

Idiom : associate with. Between A and B ,why A is wrong? "cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment ",with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff " are plural. It agrees with verb "are"


Piyatiwari alluded to this in his post, but just to clarify we choose "associated with" not because of any idiom issues. "Costs arising from" and "Costs of" are both idiomatically correct, and in fact "costs of" is even more concise than "costs associated with"!

What makes the difference here is parallelism. We're discussing the costs in two categories: "data-processing equipment" and "development and maintenance of ..." Since the sentence has "and with the development and maintenance ..." we should choose (B) because it is most parallel.

My take? Idioms are difficult (and rare), so think first about other issues.

Cheers,
Mark

sir, i have a doubt regarding subject verb agreement if we took the costs associated then associated will be its verb and then are in this sentence make it incorrect please clearify


associated is a past-participle verb and it modifies the noun The costs. It isn't the main verb in that sentence.
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   20 Dec 2016, 01:41
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MarkSullivan wrote:
TomB wrote:
While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

A. cost associated with

B. costs associated with

C. costs arising from

D. cost of

E. costs of

Idiom : associate with. Between A and B ,why A is wrong? "cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment ",with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff " are plural. It agrees with verb "are"


Piyatiwari alluded to this in his post, but just to clarify we choose "associated with" not because of any idiom issues. "Costs arising from" and "Costs of" are both idiomatically correct, and in fact "costs of" is even more concise than "costs associated with"!

What makes the difference here is parallelism. We're discussing the costs in two categories: "data-processing equipment" and "development and maintenance of ..." Since the sentence has "and with the development and maintenance ..." we should choose (B) because it is most parallel.

My take? Idioms are difficult (and rare), so think first about other issues.

Cheers,
Mark

sir, i have a doubt regarding subject verb agreement if we took the costs associated then associated will be its verb and then are in this sentence make it incorrect please clearify

thanks but if that is the case then the whole clause become subject i think and then only it will make sense because costs are prohibitive doesn't make sense for me and if whole clause is subject then it must be singular as clause or phrase act as a subject then it must be singular. please explain
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   20 Dec 2016, 03:51
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sir, i have a doubt regarding subject verb agreement if we took the costs associated then associated will be its verb and then are in this sentence make it incorrect please clearify

Hi Rishabh, as nguyendinhtuong mentioned, "associated" is used as a "past participle" and not a "verb".

Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses a very simple framework to distinguish between Verbs and Past Participle. If someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.
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thanks but if that is the case then the whole clause become subject i think and then only it will make sense because costs are prohibitive doesn't make sense for me and if whole clause is subject then it must be singular as clause or phrase act as a subject then it must be singular. please explain

Hi Rishabh, your question is not very clear. Do you mean that the entire Noun phrase (and not "clause") becomes the subject? Indeed that's the case.

Also, why do you say: costs are prohibitive doesn't make sense for me.
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   21 Dec 2016, 22:54
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thanks but if that is the case then the whole clause become subject i think and then only it will make sense because costs are prohibitive doesn't make sense for me and if whole clause is subject then it must be singular as clause or phrase act as a subject then it must be singular. please explain

Hi Rishabh, your question is not very clear. Do you mean that the entire Noun phrase (and not "clause") becomes the subject? Indeed that's the case.

Also, why do you say: costs are prohibitive doesn't make sense for me.


sir somebody above said the costs is subject here and associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff is modifier here and are prohibitive are is verb here. I want to know that if this is the case then the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff act as a subject of the clause the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive and i have learned that if a clause or phrase act as a subject then it must be singular. hope now you understand what i really want to convey. :(
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   22 Dec 2016, 04:27
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sir somebody above said the costs is subject here and associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff is modifier here and are prohibitive are is verb here. I want to know that if this is the case then the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff act as a subject of the clause the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive and i have learned that if a clause or phrase act as a subject then it must be singular. hope now you understand what i really want to convey. :(


Hi bud, let me try to explain this.

While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the costs associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

In the above CORRECT sentence, what is the subject costs doing?
Here we have two ways to answer my above question.
  • association?
  • prohibition?

Clearly, they are involving in the task 'prohibition' and not 'association.' Here "associated" plays the role of verb-ed modifier.
To simplify further, see the below.

  • the costs are prohibitive.
  • the costs associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff

The first sentence is showing a purpose for costs, but what are costs doing in the second sentence? Nothing!

See this article by eGmat: ed-forms-verbs-or-modifiers-134691.html

Hope this helps :)
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   01 Jul 2017, 14:25
While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

(A) cost associated with
(B) costs associated with
(C) costs arising from
(D) cost of
(E) costs of

Clearly B - Parallelism

We need - Associated with

Costs ===> which matches to plural are prohibitive.

Hence, Answer is B
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   03 Oct 2018, 10:39
What are prohibitive? For the sake of subject-verb agreement, the plural noun costs must be used rather than the singular cost: the costs… are prohibitive. The phrase associated with is required to complete the parallel construction costs associated with upgrading… and with the development of… .

A Singular cost does not agree with the plural verb are

B Correct. The plural noun costs agrees with the plural verb are; using costs associated with means that with upgrading is parallel to with the development.

C From upgrading is not parallel to with the development of

D Singular cost does not agree with the plural verb are; of upgrading is not parallel to with the development of

E Of upgrading is not parallel to with the development of

The correct answer is B.
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   27 Oct 2019, 11:14
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While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing operations, many smaller regional and community banks are finding that the cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment and with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff are prohibitive.

(A) cost associated with
(B) costs associated with
(C) costs arising from
(D) cost of
(E) costs of


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Idiom : associate with. Between A and B ,why A is wrong? "cost associated with upgrading data-processing equipment ",with the development and maintenance of new products and technical staff " are plural. It agrees with verb "are"


Main Issues:


1) SV: "Costs .... are"
2) Parallelism: "Costs associated with ... and with ..."

(A) cost associated with - Wrong: 1) SV
(B) costs associated with - Correct
(C) costs arising from - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
(D) cost of - Wrong: 1) SV 2) Parallelism
(E) costs of - Wrong: 1) Parallelism
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Re: While larger banks can afford to maintain their own data-processing op [#permalink] New post   01 Jul 2020, 08:53
The "are" at the end of the sentence implies that the "cost" should be plural. A, D, and E wrong/

parallelism: "and with the development..." is parallel to "with upgrading data-processing...". Therefore B correct.
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