Your profile is really amazing. Starting with academics, strong grades with a number of achievements, so on this parameter you are an outstanding candidate. Wish you luck for a great GMAT!
Now about your work ex, you have interacted with a number of stakeholders of an organization which must give you a very diverse insight of the working and relationships of an organization. I can clearly see a mature leader in your profile. You have led expansion in two organizations out of the three you worked in, which shows a person possessing an ability to take risks and convert them into opportunities. Also, working with so many regional distributors and travelling almost the whole of Nigeria must have equipped you with a great knowledge of the country. But here, since I can not see international experience in your profile, try to give your post-MBA goals a global outlook so that adcoms know that you are aware of your weaknesses and wish to work on them through your MBA and a particular school. Overall, a great work experience.
About your ECs, they are very interesting and impactful, one of the best I have seen in candidates. These give a sense of innovation, leadership and a problem-solver. And the best part is you have got recognition for all your works, in your professional life, in your academic life and through your ECs by featuring in a ‘top’ magazine to lend your profile credibility. Your post-MBA goals, too, make sense and are perfectly aligned with your prior career. For this profile, you may get eligible for scholarship programs in your target schools, so try to search on this part too. Now, the most important part in such a strong application to get converted is connecting the dots and building a great story. If you’d like we are happy to hope on a call sometime this week to discuss your essays and your chances in some other great schools in further detail. Feel free to
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Goodday,
Kindly review my profile...i'll be applying to LBS, Rotman and Kellogg
an overview of my experience: ~4 Years in Sales Management entirely in a customer facing/ Execution role, and i want to transition into a Strategy role (Link between sales and Marketing)
Background and nationalityNigerian Male, will be 27 by Matriculation date
Undergrad InformationBSc. Engineering Physics (Material Science Major) from Obafemi Awolowo University, 2016 (Among Top 5 Universities in Nigeria)
3.47/4 GPA
- Best Graduating Student, BSc. Eng. Physics
- Best Graduating student, Material Science Option
- Recipient of Lagos state Scholarship for High performing undergrads
- President, Physics and Engineering Physics Students Association
- Vice President, Physics and Engineering Physics Students Association
- Treasurer, Physics and Engineering Physics Students Association
GMAT: September Test date
Work experience and leadership2016-2017: Key Account Manager at Procter & Gamble (P&G) Nigeria- I managed Stakeholders within my coverage area across the entire value chain for the company...From Distributors to the final consumers.
my main duties were split into two;
- Building the Organization: Responsible for Training and developing the regional distributor selling organization
- Building the Business: I led a Sales force of 30 Reps(across trade channels) to ensure availability of all P&G brands in over 10,000 points of purchase across two states in the South Southern part of Nigeria.
2017-2019: Area Sales Manager at Transmed Distribution & Logistics Nigeria-Identified business opportunities in the region & with key accounts to increase market share & improve overall positioning of Transmed's brands
- Led the Expansion of the company's reach; Setting up the GTM, engaging stakeholders and Training the sales force, to new coverage areas in the South Southern Part of Nigeria
-Managed 6 direct reports (Field sales managers)
- Was Awarded the best Distribution expansion sales manager of the year.
2019-Present: Sales Manager at Pernod Ricard Nigeria -I currently manage the end to end operations of regional distributors in the South Southern and Eastern parts of Nigeria...Main goal is to ensure all Pernod Ricard's brands are available at all points of purchase and consumption outlets in the region.
- Major highlight has been the successful introduction of Pernod Ricard's brands to 5 new states, and concurrently guiding Jameson to be the best selling and most distributed premium whiskey in two of these states.
- I work with the marketing team to craft consumer targeted plans and activation for my region.
Community and others-
Founding Member of Consonance Club; Consonance is a social enterprise that facilitates partnerships and collaboration towards the collective good. The journey started with supporting the development of Africa by investing in the young tech enthusiasts, and has morphed into facilitating collaborations among innovators, builders and entrepreneurs.
-Founding Member, Cloudshot Technology Limited; Cloudshot is a technology organization aimed at creating innovative means to solving problems using technology. We taught practical engineering classes to undergraduates, and also provided web and mobile solutions to problems identified in the school community. these impacts earned myself and other founding members mentions as part of the "Top 100 Students that shaped Obafemi Awolowo University in 2015" (
https://www.oaupeeps.com/2016/02/oya-mag ... t.html?m=1)
-Electoral Chairman, Faculty of Science, Obafemi Awolowo University :I led a 5 Man electoral team that oversaw the electioneering process in the largest Faculty (over 5000 students) in the university, and recorded a little over 50% election day turnout (highest in recent times). the integrity of the whole process was upheld via systems put in place to guarantee the interest of the students was priority. this earned me a mention in one of the top Online magazines on campus (
https://www.oaupeeps.com/2016/03/nass-oa ... l.html?m=1)
-Adventure Traveller: i've visited 25 of the 36 states in Nigeria
Post MBA goalsHaving spent the bulk of my career interacting and relating with different profile of customers and consumers across the consumer goods industry (From HPC to Food, and Spirits & Wines) and also working in different organizational structures, i've been able to garner a diversity of experience on what people want, and how they react to different offerings. I would love to transition into a Strategy role where i can further anticipate consumer wants and needs via market insights and data, and offer better propositions to the Execution teams.
Ideal Post MBA roles; Market Strategy & Planning, Revenue growth Management and Brand/Product Management.
Industires: Consumer goods and Tech.