OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
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Unlike the invasions of the Italian peninsula by sea, as had been done by all previous aggressors, Hannibal chose to travel over the Alps to invade by land from the north.
A) Unlike the invasions of the Italian peninsula by sea, as had been done by all previous aggressors, Hannibal chose to travel over the Alps to invade
B) Unlike all previous aggressors, who invaded the Italian peninsula by sea, Hannibal had chosen to travel over the Alps, invading
C) Compared to all previous aggressors, who had invaded the Italian peninsula by sea, the choice of Hannibal was to travel over the Alps to invade
D) Rather than invade the Italian peninsula by sea, as all previous aggressors had done, Hannibal chose to travel over the Alps to invade
E) Instead of all previous aggressors’ sea invasions of the Italian peninsula, Hannibal chose to travel over the Alps, invading
MAGOOSH OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONIn a logically sound comparison, we must compare like to like.
We can compare invasion to invasion, person to person, etc., but we cannot compare an invasion to a person.
Choice (A) compares invasions to Hannibal.
That is, (A) states, "Unlike the invasions … Hannibal," an illogical comparison.
This choice is incorrect.
Eliminate A
In Choice (B), the comparison is sound, person to person, but the verb tense is strange.
The "previous aggressors" obviously came before Hannibal, and their actions preceded his, so the past perfect tense of
had chosen for Hannibal is illogical.
Past perfect describes the earlier of two actions in the past. Hannibal was not the earlier of the two (the further back in time).
This choice is incorrect.
Eliminate B
Choice (C) states, "Compared all previous aggressors, … the choice of Hannibal," and thus compares
people to the
choice made by one person.
That’s an illogical comparison.
This choice is incorrect.
Eliminate C
In Choice (D), the
rather than structure compares verbs, so the comparison is
invade vs.
chose to travel, a sound comparison.
This version is error-free.
KEEP
In Choice (E), the object of the preposition
instead of is
sea invasions, which is illogically compared to the
person Hannibal. This option's errors are easier to see if we strip the sentence a bit.
E) Instead of . . . sea invasions of the Italian peninsula, Hannibal chose to travel over the Alps . . .This choice is incorrect.
Eliminate E
The only possible choice is (D).COMMENTSThis iteration of the Butler crew
is in fine form.
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