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I don't think E is correct answer.
It changes the meaning as it defines foreign minister did 2 different things. But actual sentence says that one was intended to produce another effect.

Option B retains original meaning so that should be correct one.

You are right. I have made changes accordingly.

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Did not get the intended meaning and eventually how B is correct?? Please help.
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A repackaging of existing schemes in southern Mexico, the announcement of the fund of $5 billion a year made by the foreign minister to discourage migration of people from Central America to the United States.

A) A repackaging of existing schemes in southern Mexico, the announcement of the fund of $5 billion a year made by the foreign minister to discourage
B) A repackaging of existing schemes in southern Mexico, the fund of $5 billion a year was announced by the foreign minister to discourage
C) Repackaging of existing schemes in southern Mexico was announced by the foreign minister to discourage the funding of $5 billion a year and
D) Repackaging existing schemes, the funding of $5 billion a year in southern Mexico was announced by the foreign minister to discourage
E) Repackaging the existing schemes in southern Mexico, the foreign minister announced the fund of $5 billion a year, and he discouraged


Look at the role being played by the modifier in the beginning of the sentence -

"a repackaging of ..." is a noun phrase. Then this must be an appositive and must appear directly next to the noun it is renaming.

"repackaging existing schemes," should modify the subject of the clause following it. The subject should be repackaging the existing scheme.

In (A), the appositive is next to "the announcement". Announcement is not repackaging so this is incorrect.
In (D), repackaging modifies "the funding". But the funding is not the one repackaging. So this is incorrect too.

By announcing the fund, he is discouraging migration so you are not making them independent clauses. So (E) is incorrect.

In (C), repackaging of existing schemes was not announced. The fund was announced. That it is a repackaging of existing schemes is a comment by the author, not an announcement.

This leaves (B) which is correct.
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