OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
A system of underground tunnels at the White House were built on an impressive scale, with a complex communication network, to lead to the Deep Underground Command Center in the case a national emergency.
• Subject?
System, singular.
System is the "head noun" in the noun phrase "a system of underground tunnels."
The prepositional phrase
of underground tunnels describes and is thus a modifier of the main noun,
system.
• Modifier placement?
Remember the "Touch Rule": almost always, a
noun modifier should be placed adjacent to (should "touch") the noun it describes.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) House were built on an impressive scale, with a complex communication network, to lead to the Deep Underground Command Center in the case [OF] a national emergency
• Subject-verb agreement
→ The plural verb
were does not agree with the singular subject
system• Poorly placed modifier
→ what does
with a complex communication network modify? Scale? The system? The building of the system?
→ we are working too hard to understand
• IDIOM ERROR
→
correct: in the event OF a national emergency
→
wrong: in the event a national emergency
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) House were built on an impressive scale, which has a complex communication network, leading to the Deep Underground Command Center in the event of a national emergency
• Subject-verb agreement—same problem as that in option A
• Modifier error
→
which has a complex communication network should modify
system, but appears to modify
scale.Although the antecedent of
which can sometimes be far away, except in very rare circumstances,
which cannot "jump back" over the verb
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) House, featuring a complex communication network, was built on an impressive scale to lead to the Deep Underground Command Center in the event of a national emergency
• I see no errors.
→ The singular verb
was agrees with
system.→ After reviewing options D and E, this answer is both grammatical and stylistically superior to all four of the others
kEEP
Quote:
D) House was built on an impressive scale with a complex communication network to lead to the Deep Underground Command Center should a national emergency occurs
• Verb problems
→
occurs should be
occur→ "Should" in this case functions as a WERE statement:
[i]were a national emergency to occur[/i].
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) House were built on an impressive scale, with a complex communication network, that lead to the Deep Underground Command Center in case of a national emergency
• both
were and
lead disagree with the singular subject, system [of tunnels].
Those words should be
was and
leads, respectively.
ELIMINATE E
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