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In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.

(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984
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15 Oct 2007, 11:53

A is out because there is an incomplete clause after the semicolon
B corrects the error
C good contender
D awkward usage
E changes the meaning of the senctence.

between b and c I will pick B

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In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.
(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

I say B.

B correctly uses the semi colon.

A: the semi collon here caues a sentence fragment. "and forty-four percent in 1984" is not a complete thought.

C: and in 1984 doesn't properly refer to the beg. of the sentence.
D: should use a semi colon. this is a run on b/c two independent thoughts here.
E: I just didn't like this sentence. I think it changes the meaning.

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15 Oct 2007, 18:45
nehanishika wrote:
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.
(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

will go for B,

A- out, cuz the second part of the sentence after semicolon can not be an independent sentence on its own.
C- lacks verb
D- the structure of the sentence should be "forty-four percent was..."
E- changes the meaning of the original sentence.

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15 Oct 2007, 22:02
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nehanishika wrote:
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.
(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

will go for B,

A- out, cuz the second part of the sentence after semicolon can not be an independent sentence on its own.
C- lacks verb
D- the structure of the sentence should be "forty-four percent was..."

E- changes the meaning of the original sentence.

Yes, I am going with B....it keeps the llism...

Question: Year....payment.....percent....

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nehanishika wrote:
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.
(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

Tough call b/w B & C.

The sentence wants to say:

In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income and in 1984 [they represented] forty-four percent [of an avg. thirty yr old male's income]

I pick C since according to me, the parts in brackets are understood.

What's the OA and OE?

I would like to know why parts in the bracket are not understood if the answer is B.

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28 Dec 2007, 06:57
OA is B. (from SC1000,#353)

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28 Dec 2007, 20:34
I will go with B as well. Makes perfect sense since using the semi-colon is the only way out!

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28 Aug 2017, 09:52
(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984 .... ; and is wrong
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent, Independent clause ; independent clause ..correct
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent... verb is missing
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure , Two IC connected with comma is wrong
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984....income that implies same income

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nehanishika wrote:
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.

(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

A is out as we have to connect two independent sentences with semicolon
B correct as the sentence after semicolon provides additional information .
C not correct although semicolon is not there but we do have a proper comparison 44 % of what.
D it awkward
E it was not the income that rose , it was mortgage payments.
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28 Aug 2017, 20:34
nehanishika wrote:
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.

(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

it is hard.
look at choice C.
if we use ellipsis, we need a paralelism. there is no paralelism here so, C is wrong.
this point is hard.

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29 Aug 2017, 16:25
nehanishika wrote:
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.

(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984

I have chosen B, because it sounds better than C.

But i don't have exact explanation how to eliminate C.
From one side we do not need to repeat the verb if the tense is same for 2 parts of the sentence.
From the other side option
"income, and in 1984 represented forty-four percent" sounds much better.

Can someone, please, shed light on this issue?

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