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[C] is the only option that maintains parallelism, so that should be the right answer.
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Can anyone please explain why the choice E is not correct? All three elements in the list are connect properly with "are".
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Can anyone please explain why the choice E is not correct? All three elements in the list are connect properly with "are".


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In option D ,can that //are clean and //grow fast be parallel?
Some explanations to this question state otherwise.
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Sachinpri - No! In (D), "are clean" and "are grow" cannot be parallel.

Putting (D) in the given sentence:
Many states, in search of industries that are clean and grow fast, paying good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.

This implies,
that are clean,
and
that are grow fast (weird, isn't it? "growing fast" would be the correct noun form here)...this is enough to eliminate (D)

Hope this clarifies.

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In option D ,can that //are clean and //grow fast be parallel?
Some explanations to this question state otherwise.
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Sachinpri - No! In (D), "are clean" and "grow" cannot be parallel.

Putting (D) in the given sentence:
Many states, in search of industries that are clean and grow fast, paying good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.

This implies,
that are clean,
and
that are grow fast (weird, isn't it? "growing fast" would be the correct noun form here)...this is enough to eliminate (D)

Hope this clarifies.

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In option D ,can that //are clean and //grow fast be parallel?
Some explanations to this question state otherwise.
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Hi.
Thanks for the reply
I was asking if are clean and grow fast can be parallel to each other,are clean being a verb and grow fast being a verb
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I was asking if are clean and grow fast can be parallel to each other,are clean being a verb and grow fast being a verb
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Yes, these verbs could be parallel (if it would make sense in context to make them parallel).
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Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and pay good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.

(A) clean, fast-growing, and pay
(B) clean, grow fast, and that pay
(C) clean and fast-growing and that pay
(D) clean and grow fast, paying
(E) clean, fast-growing, and paying


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Can this be a possible right answer, if it was present in the options?

"Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and that are paying good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries."
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Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and pay good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.

(A) clean, fast-growing, and pay
(B) clean, grow fast, and that pay
(C) clean and fast-growing and that pay
(D) clean and grow fast, paying
(E) clean, fast-growing, and paying


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Can this be a possible right answer, if it was present in the options?

"Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and that are paying good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries."

Hello sudiksha7,

To answer your query, no; the option you have proposed would not be correct.

"that are paying" is not parallel to "clean" and "fast-growing"; remember, all elements in a list must be parallel.

Further, the use of the simple present continuous tense "are paying" to refer to a habitual action is incorrect; remember, habitual actions are best conveyed through the simple present tense, and the simple present continuous tense is used to refer to actions that are currently ongoing and continuous in nature.

We hope this helps.
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Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and pay good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.

(A) clean, fast-growing, and pay
(B) clean, grow fast, and that pay
(C) clean and fast-growing and that pay
(D) clean and grow fast, paying
(E) clean, fast-growing, and paying

(A) clean, fast-growing, and pay

clean = adjective
fast-growing = adjective
pay = verb

Parallelism error.

Can eliminate Option (A)

(B) clean, grow fast, and that pay

are clean = verb + modifier
grow fast = verb + modifier
that pay = modifier + verb

Clear parallelism error.

We would need an "and" between "are clean" and "grow fast" to make it work.

Can eliminate Option (B)

(C) clean and fast-growing and that pay

Exactly what we need! An "and" between "clean" & "fast-growing"

We have nested parallelism here.

that "are clean" and "are fast-growing"
that "pay good wages"

Looks good let's keep Option (C)

(D) clean and grow fast, paying

I was very shocked to see that only 1% of people marked Option (D).

I think everyone eliminated this option because "clean" and "grow" are not parallel. But in fact, they are perfectly parallel. -

are clean = verb + adjective
grow fast = verb + adjective

Functions "paying" could perform -
i) Verb-ing modifier : comma + "paying" (a verb-ing modifier) modifies a previous clause but there is no clause here to modify. So this possibility is incorrect. ❌
ii) Noun modifier : A noun modifier modifies the preceding element. Logically, we want "paying" to modify "industries" but clearly that is not possible here. ❌

Can eliminate Option (D). I'm still surprised only 1% marked this. Clearly either everyone missed this or I am over analyzing.

(E) clean, fast-growing, and paying

are clean = verb + adjective
are fast-growing = verb + adjective
are paying = present continuous verb

"are paying" is just one big verb nothing more. Easy to miss!

Another reason I used was that the sentence is stating general requirements for industries not for industries currently paying good wages

Can eliminate Option (E).

Option (C) is the answer!

Takeaways -
i) Avoid eliminating words on incorrect parallelism blindly. Look at the whole sentence and then eliminate.
ii) It is important to check in parallel statements if verb + “verb-ing” results in an action.

Thanks for reading!
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Many states are in search of industries that have three qualities:

1. Clean
2. Fast-growing
3. Good paymaster

In such a search, these states are trying to attract high tech industries.

There is one error in the sentence: verb “pay” is not parallel to the adjective “clean” and “fast-growing”.

Option Analysis

A. clean, fast-growing, and pay
Incorrect. For the reason mentioned above.

B. clean, grow fast, and that pay
Incorrect. The clause “that pay” is not parallel to the verbs “are” and “grow”.

C. clean and fast-growing and that pay
Correct. The sentence now consists of two lists.
1. The first list consists of two adjectives: clean and fast-growing
2. The second list consists of two “that” clauses – “that are clean…” and “that pay…”

Both the lists have parallel elements and thus are correct.

D. clean and grow fast, paying
Incorrect. The comma+verb-ing “,paying” doesn’t provide additional info about the preceding clause. The idea communicate by “paying” needs to be parallel to the idea of “clean” and “fast growth”.

E. clean, fast-growing, and paying
Incorrect. The adjectives “ clean” and “fast-growing” are not parallel to the verb “paying” (“paying” is a verb here since it attaches with “are”, which is common to all the three elements).

GMATIntensive, @DmitryFarber,@ArtVandaley and other experts:
In option B, I'm confused why the parts aren't parallel here since they're all verb+adjective:
1. are clean (Verb+adjective)
2. grow fast (verb+adjective)
3. pay good (verb+adjective)
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In option B, I'm confused why the parts aren't parallel here since they're all verb+adjective:
1. are clean (Verb+adjective)
2. grow fast (verb+adjective)
3. pay good (verb+adjective)
Actually "fast" is not an adjective here. Rather, in this context "fast," which can be an adjective or an adverb, is used as an adverb to modify "grow."

At the same time, the three verbs could be parallel. So, there is another issue with the (B) version.

Here's the list in the (B) version.

industries that are clean, grow fast, and that pay good wages

We can see that the first and third list elements include "that," while the second element doesn't include "that." So, the second element is not parallel to the other two.
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Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-
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Many states, in search of industries that are clean, fast-growing, and pay good wages to skilled workers, are trying to attract high-technology industries.

(A) clean, fast-growing, and pay
(B) clean, grow fast, and that pay
(C) clean and fast-growing and that pay
(D) clean and grow fast, paying
(E) clean, fast-growing, and paying


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Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:
Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of the crucial part of this sentence is that many states are in search of industries that are clean and fast-growing and pay good wages to skilled workers.

Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Tenses + Parallelism

• All elements in a list must be parallel.
• The introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “paying” in this case) after the comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.
• Habitual actions are best conveyed through the simple present tense.
• The simple present continuous tense is used to refer to actions that are currently ongoing and continuous in nature.

A: Trap.
1/ This answer choice fails to maintain parallelism among "clean", "fast-growing", and "pay good wages"; remember, all elements in a list must be parallel.

B:
1/ This answer choice fails to maintain parallelism among "are clean", "grow fast", and "that pay good wages"; remember, all elements in a list must be parallel.

C: Correct.
1/ This answer choice uses the phrase "and that pay good wages", conveying the intended meaning - that many states are in search of industries that are clean and fast-growing and as a separate action, pay good wages to skilled workers.
2/ Option C correctly uses the simple present tense verb "pay" to refer to a habitual action.
3/ Option C avoids the parallelism errors seen in Options A and B, as it splits the list into two, maintaining parallelism between the phrases "that are clean and fast-growing" and "that pay good wages" and between the elements listed within the first phrase - "clean" and "fast-growing".

D:
1/ This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "paying good wages"; the use of the "comma + present participle ("verb+ing" - "paying" in this sentence)" construction incorrectly implies that many states are in search of industries that are clean and fast-growing because they pay good wages to skilled workers; the intended meaning is that many states are in search of industries that are clean and fast-growing and as a separate action, pay good wages to skilled workers; remember, the introduction of present participle ("verb+ing"- “paying” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

E: Trap.
1/ This answer choice incorrectly uses the simple present continuous tense verb "are...paying" to refer to a habitual action; remember, habitual actions are best conveyed through the simple present tense, and the simple present continuous tense is used to refer to actions that are currently ongoing and continuous in nature.

Hence, C is the best answer choice.

To understand the concept of "Comma Plus Present Participle for Cause-Effect Relationship", you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):



To understand the concept of "Simple Tenses" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):



To understand the concept of "Simple Continuous Tenses", you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):



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