Pinloo4
Hi everyone,
I'm planning to apply for a 2021 intake MiF program. My objective is to pursue a Master in Finance from a well-known business school to secure a job in S&T/HF in Europe.
Nationality / Age:
Brazilian / 22 y.o.
GMAT:720 (target - mock test averaging 720)
TOELF:110
Work experience:
Full Time:
1) 1 year - Associate at a Big4 - Investment Banking division (M&A/Restructuring - current job) in Brazil;
Internships:
2) 8 month internship at a brazilian credit Hedge Fund (+1B USD - biggest credit HF in the region);
3) 8 month internship at a swiss startup in London.
Educational Background:
1) Business Management in Brazil (non-target school, but well ranked regionally (top 20 market, below 50 for academic prestige)) - Graduated in 2019
CGPA 3.89 (9.73/10) highest grade of the class
2) Commerce in France (non-target) while in a scholarship Double-degree program (12 months program).
CGPA: 16/20 (French grades are a bit harder to "translate" into GPA).
Extra Curricular:
6 months of NGO work (10 hours per week)
Undergraduate teaching assistant (Corporate Finance) in university.
Won 2 Business Challenges at university level.
Extracurricular Obs*:
During college, I worked with my parents in their family business. For this reason, I didn't participate in extracurriculars activities while in studying. I choose to focus in my studies and helping my parents.
Master program(s) targets:
Oxford, HEC, St. Gallen, LBS, LSE, ETH Zurich (Quant finance), WHU, Bocconi. I'm open to hear suggestions as well.
Thanks for taking the time to evaluate this profile. I’m eager to receive your feedback.
Hey
Pinloo4I’d like to say that you have a pretty strong profile.
Your GMAT score of 720 and GPA 3.89 is great, reflecting your strong academic suit.
Besides, you must consider the competition you will face from applicants of top-ranking colleges. However, being from Brazil, your ethnicity will help, as schools are always on the lookout for people from different nationalities to improve the diversity of the cohort
Emphasizing international exposure in London can work out as quite a strong point in your application as schools value profiles with international experience. You can talk about the work you did during your internship. Aim to highlight projects and make sure you include the skills you developed during that time.
Given your strong interest in Finance, it’s great to see that your work-ex is complementing your interest in the chosen field, be it working with a big 4 or undertaking internships.
It certainly would convey your defined interest in Finance and, more specifically, the brand name of the big 4 company and the kind of roles you’ve taken up would further solidify your application as M.Fin schools are pretty appreciative of applicant’s work-ex in the finance domain.
Even the experience of working in your family business, a go-getter attitude, self-learning capabilities, and drive (among other things), if properly explained, will be a good differentiating point for your application.
Although you’ve highlighted some extracurriculars like social work in an NGO, working as a teaching assistant, winning Business Challenge., it would really be instrumental to showcase the impact you could create by going above and beyond in your endeavors- like leading teams and developing your skill set along the way.
Talking about the schools you are targeting are pretty competitive wherein
Oxford, HEC, St. Gallen, LBS come under the dream category, while LSE, ETH Zurich, WHU, Bocconi would fall under the competitive category.
Though since your profile is pretty strong, make sure you ace every part of the application (essays, GMAT, LOR, resume) showcasing your passion for finance competently you can have a good chance in most of your target schools.
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