Very poorly transcribed. The portion starting from '' plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling" seems to be common to all the five choices. Then why underline it and frighten others?
Aside from that, one must be careful while interpreting the meaning of the word overlooking. It might mean to ignore a fault or to look at something from a higher place. When overlook is used to denote seeing from a higher elevation, it is mostly used with permanent geographical features. Here a prison is overlooking a vintage and beautiful village.
Overlooking a quaint eastern German village, an entrepreneur recently purchased the Schloss Hoheneck prison who plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling"A. Overlooking a quaint eastern German village, an entrepreneur recently purchased the Schloss Hoheneck prison who plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling" --
misplaced modificationB. Overlooking a quaint eastern German village, an entrepreneur who recently purchased the Schloss Hoheneck prison plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling" -
misplaced modification C. Overlooking a quaint eastern German village, the Schloss Hoheneck prison was recently purchased by an entrepreneur who plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling"--
the correct choice, notwithstanding the passive voice. D. An entrepreneur who recently purchased, overlooking a quaint eastern German village, the Schloss Hoheneck prison, plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling" ---
The adverbial modifier -, overlooking, wrongly modifies the entrepreneurs' of action of purchasing . It may also mean that the entrepreneur is overlooking. Both are wrong notions. E. An entrepreneur, having recently purchased the Schloss Hoheneck prison, overlooking a quaint eastern German village, plans to convert it into a hotel where customers will pay over US$100 per night to sleep on a hard bed, eat poor-quality food, and experience what he calls that "irresistible jail-house feeling" --
Same problem as in D. thevenus wrote:
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please clarify (B) "overlooking" is modifying "the school" or "an entrepreneurship"?
if (c) be the answer;
how can a school overlook? only a person(entrepreneurship can )
Hi
There is no school mentioned anywhere in the topic. There is only a vintage prison. The word 'Schloss' is the name of the prison. Similarly, there is no word as 'entrepreneurship'. There is only 'entrepreneur".
This is a good question for practice on modification, especially choices D and E.