anvesh004 wrote:
When a passenger aircraft crashed in the jungles near the village of Triskiti, local tribesmen collected pieces of the broken plane before they could be carefully examined where they had fallen, unintentionally thwarting the efforts of investigators that already were made difficult by the remoteness of the crash site.
Source: Manhattan
The GMAT will not make a test taker decide whether information is essential. (Only one modifying structure will be correct grammatically, as is the case here.)
Quote:
A. unintentionally thwarting the efforts of investigators that already were made difficult by the remoteness of
When referring to
people, the relative
pronoun is always who, and never
that.
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I think the "that" here refers to efforts and usage of "that" to refer to people is illogical(also GMAT doesn't allow us to do so)
Quote:
B. unintentionally thwarting the efforts of investigators, which already were made difficult by the remoteness of
Correct.
-- "which" can modify a noun phrase (
efforts of investigators)
-- "which" can "reach back to" a noun followed by modifiers, because:
-- the phrase
of investigators is essential;
-- essential modifiers "trump" nonessential ones in terms of proximity to what is being modified; and
--
of investigators cannot be placed elsewhere in the sentence.
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C. unintentionally thwarting the efforts of investigators, that had already been were made difficult by the remoteness of [I THINK THIS OPTION HAS A TYPO - extra verb?]
that signals essential information. Essential information is never set off by a comma or commas.
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D. unintentionally thwarting the efforts of investigators, and [SUBJECT? PRONOUN?] already were made difficult by the remoteness of
This sentence is a fragment. There are not two independent clauses.
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E. unintentional in thwarting the efforts of investigators, and already were made difficult by the remote location of
Fragment as in (D).
A location does not make investigative efforts difficult. The location's
remoteness does.
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In this post a representative of
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This question comes from
Manhattan GMAT.
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Regardless of prep company, no company can replicate official questions.
Answers in this question at the moment are split between A and B.
Almost 60 percent chose (A). The other ~40 percent chose B.
We don't have to decide the issue because only (B) has no grammar errors, but if you want to check whether (B) will work, omit the entire WHICH clause.
-- the remaining sentence is fine
-- Villagers picked up pieces of a crashed plane, unintentionally thwarting the efforts of investigators.
In other words, removing the WHICH clause does not damage the core meaning of the sentence.
Grammarians online and in books are split on the issue of whether "that" can refer to people.
GMAC is not split.
People are modified by
who.
The answer is B.In my opinion, this is not a case in which we can surely say whether the part that follows "that"/"which" - "already were made difficult by the remoteness of the crash site."- is essential or non-essential.
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