Last visit was: 15 Dec 2024, 05:27 It is currently 15 Dec 2024, 05:27
Close
GMAT Club Daily Prep
Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.

Customized
for You

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Track
Your Progress

every week, we’ll send you an estimated GMAT score based on your performance

Practice
Pays

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History
Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.
Close
Request Expert Reply
Confirm Cancel
User avatar
Nevernevergiveup
User avatar
Retired Moderator
Joined: 18 Sep 2014
Last visit: 20 Aug 2023
Posts: 1,010
Own Kudos:
2,881
 []
Given Kudos: 79
Location: India
Products:
Posts: 1,010
Kudos: 2,881
 []
Kudos
Add Kudos
10
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
User avatar
aditya8062
User avatar
Retired Moderator
Joined: 05 Sep 2010
Last visit: 26 Nov 2020
Posts: 504
Own Kudos:
648
 []
Given Kudos: 61
Posts: 504
Kudos: 648
 []
Kudos
Add Kudos
2
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
User avatar
hwgmat2015
Joined: 12 Mar 2015
Last visit: 24 Jul 2020
Posts: 59
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 92
Concentration: Leadership, Finance
GPA: 3.9
WE:Information Technology (Computer Software)
Posts: 59
Kudos: 49
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
User avatar
sairam595
Joined: 15 Aug 2014
Last visit: 23 Dec 2016
Posts: 219
Own Kudos:
593
 []
Given Kudos: 470
Status:Always try to face your worst fear because nothing GOOD comes easy. You must be UNCOMFORTABLE to get to your COMFORT ZONE
Concentration: Marketing, Technology
GMAT 1: 570 Q44 V25
GMAT 2: 600 Q48 V25
WE:Information Technology (Consulting)
Products:
GMAT 2: 600 Q48 V25
Posts: 219
Kudos: 593
 []
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
1
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Nevernevergiveup
Realizing that its best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia would be a strong navy, the assembly of all Athenian citizens voted to allow Themistocles to use the surplus silver from the public mines to build 100 ships.

A. its best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia would be
B. its best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia will be
C. its best hope of defense against a Persian invasion would have been
D. their best hope of defense against a Persian invasion would have been
E. their best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia would be

IMO A

D & E are incorrect for using their to refer singular Assembly

C- Incorrect for the usage of would have been

B- Incorrect for the usage of will be, will shows certainity

A- correct, usage of would be is correct as we use would for expectations of the future
avatar
prateek25
Joined: 05 Sep 2018
Last visit: 18 Jun 2021
Posts: 15
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 10
GMAT 1: 720 Q48 V41
GMAT 1: 720 Q48 V41
Posts: 15
Kudos: 18
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
HI Experts,
In this question, shouldn't "Assembly of Citizens" be plural just like "Majority of Citizens"?
I understand that Majority and Assembly are singular, but when you add a plural subject, they should be plural according to the Sentence Correction Grail 2018.
avatar
CJWORK
Joined: 27 Jul 2016
Last visit: 28 Jun 2020
Posts: 55
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 55
GMAT 1: 730 Q49 V40
WE:Consulting (Consulting)
GMAT 1: 730 Q49 V40
Posts: 55
Kudos: 15
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Can someone please give a detailed explanation on E?
User avatar
Akash720
Joined: 17 Jan 2017
Last visit: 05 Jun 2020
Posts: 217
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 144
Location: India
GPA: 4
WE:Information Technology (Computer Software)
Posts: 217
Kudos: 266
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
gzsakuraz
Can someone please give a detailed explanation on E?

gzsakuraz

The right pronoun for 'Assembly' is 'it.
In E, we have a pronoun error because the sentence uses 'their' rather than 'it'. Apart from that E is grammatically correct.
avatar
CJWORK
Joined: 27 Jul 2016
Last visit: 28 Jun 2020
Posts: 55
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 55
GMAT 1: 730 Q49 V40
WE:Consulting (Consulting)
GMAT 1: 730 Q49 V40
Posts: 55
Kudos: 15
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Akash720
gzsakuraz
Can someone please give a detailed explanation on E?

gzsakuraz

The right pronoun for 'Assembly' is 'it.
In E, we have a pronoun error because the sentence uses 'their' rather than 'it'. Apart from that E is grammatically correct.

What if "their" refers to citizens?
User avatar
Akash720
Joined: 17 Jan 2017
Last visit: 05 Jun 2020
Posts: 217
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 144
Location: India
GPA: 4
WE:Information Technology (Computer Software)
Posts: 217
Kudos: 266
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
gzsakuraz
Akash720
gzsakuraz

What if "their" refers to citizens?

Here, we have one assembly of all citizens. Citizens and assembly are not different entities, they are the same. Hence, the pronoun can refer to only one collective noun i.e.,"Assembly".
avatar
apovit
Joined: 07 May 2018
Last visit: 11 May 2021
Posts: 34
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 79
Location: India
GMAT 1: 560 Q43 V25
GRE 1: Q169 V154
GMAT 1: 560 Q43 V25
GRE 1: Q169 V154
Posts: 34
Kudos: 5
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Nevernevergiveup
Realizing that its best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia would be a strong navy, the assembly of all Athenian citizens voted to allow Themistocles to use the surplus silver from the public mines to build 100 ships.

A. its best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia would be
B. its best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia will be
C. its best hope of defense against a Persian invasion would have been
D. their best hope of defense against a Persian invasion would have been
E. their best hope of defense against an invasion from Persia would be

The sentence is correct as it is:

A) its-assembly which is singular, would be is correct- as it tells about the possibility from the past (conditional verb)
B) will be future wrong as if the event is yet to happen.
c) Would have been -- should be used with past perfect "if cluase"
D) their-plural for assembly is wrong
E) same as D
User avatar
globaldesi
Joined: 28 Jul 2016
Last visit: 30 Oct 2024
Posts: 1,185
Own Kudos:
1,839
 []
Given Kudos: 67
Location: India
Concentration: Finance, Human Resources
Schools: ISB '18 (D)
GPA: 3.97
WE:Project Management (Finance: Investment Banking)
Products:
Schools: ISB '18 (D)
Posts: 1,185
Kudos: 1,839
 []
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Kaplan official explanation:
There do not appear to be any errors in this sentence. The subject, "assembly," is singular, and the possessive pronoun at the beginning of the underlined portion, "its," is also singular. Remember that on the GMAT, collective nouns such as "assembly" are almost always considered singular entities. Additionally, "would be" is properly used to express a possibility. (A) is likely correct, but check the other choices to see if any improve stylistically upon the original.

A vertical scan shows that (A), (B), and (C) keep the correct pronoun, while (D) and (E) change it to the plural "their." (D) and (E) can thus be eliminated.

Since the sentence's time frame is governed by the verb "voted," a past tense verb, choice (B) with its future tense "will be" can be eliminated. Also, because the invasion has not taken place yet, the completed implication of "would have been" is incorrect here; eliminate (C). The sentence is fine as written; (A) is correct.

TAKEAWAY: Don't be tempted to overcorrect; the sentence is often correct as written.
User avatar
Mavisdu1017
Joined: 10 Aug 2021
Last visit: 04 Jan 2023
Posts: 368
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 226
Posts: 368
Kudos: 40
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
I was confused: the opening modifier should modify the subject “assembly”, but how does “assembly” do the action “realize”? I think only “citizens” can do the action, anybody can help? Thanks
Moderators:
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
7163 posts
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
234 posts