Quote:
Skeptics consider the increase in minimum wage not as a measure that will promote the economic well-being of lower-income citizens, as it is intended to be,
rather as a step that will increase unemployment and have the opposite of its intended effect.
A. rather as a step that will increase unemployment
B. yet as a step that will increase unemployment
C. but step that will increase unemployment
D. but as a step that will increase unemployment
E. but also as a step that may increase unemployment
Official Explanation:
Creating a filter: We read the prompt. Something appears to be missing: our trained ears want to hear not only "rather," but rather "but rather." When the word "rather" is preceded in a sentence by "not," the phrase should be "but rather," and "not [only]...but rather..." is a two-part construction requiring parallelism. We can hear this more easily by omitting the dependent clause that starts with "that will promote...," since dependent clauses can be omitted from a sentence without impacting the grammatical of the main, independent clause. "Skeptics view the increase not as a measure that will blah blah, but rather as a step blah blah." That sounds better. We look for "but rather" in the answer choices.
Applying the filter: We don't find "but rather," but answer choice (D) solves the problem by introducing the key missing word "but," to communicate the contrast that the imaginary author of this sentence intends to convey.
Choices (C) and (E) have the word "but" but in nonsensical phrases. In choice (B), also, the word "yet" is not a proper word to convey the intended function of "but," which is to establish the proper way that the minimum wage should be viewed according to the sentence. The correct answer is (D).
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Again, the correct answer is (D).