OFFICIAL EXPLANATION Project SC Butler: Day 192: Sentence Correction (SC1)
• MEANING The economic problem of Puerto Rico is properly characterized as a surplus of labor, not as overpopulation.
Operation B made the surplus of labor worse. The operation decreased demand for labor. Operation B simply made a problem worse.
THE PROMPT, shortened a littleThe economic problem Puerto Rico has is, properly characterized, a surplus of labor, not overpopulation, and it only was aggravated when
the massive influx of capital that took place under Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
We'll work with this shortened version of the prompt:
Quote:
The economic problem Puerto Rico has is, properly characterized, a surplus of labor, not overpopulation, and it only was aggravated when Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) The economic problem Puerto Rico has is, properly characterized,[/color] a surplus of labor, not overpopulation, and it only was aggravated when Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
• This sentence is a disaster. it is convoluted, choppy, and indirect.
Example:
The problem ABC has . . . IS? • does “it” create pronoun ambiguity? I don’t think so.
• IT must have only one logical antecedent.
-- If we can tell from context that “it” logically refers to only one noun, we probably do not have pronoun ambiguity.
-- The first part of the sentence identifies the problem: a surplus of labor
-- the second part of the sentence describes something that would aggravate a surplus of labor. That is:
(1) Operation B aggravated “it” by decreasing demand for labor. A surplus of labor would definitely be aggravated if demand for labor declined.
(2) How could a decreased demand for labor
affect overpopulation, never mind
aggravate overpopulation (which is not the problem)?
• I would not eliminate A based on pronoun ambiguity unless it were the last of two options. But I would look for an option without ambiguity.
• the placement of
properly characterized is jarring
• “only” is wrongly placed.
-- Meaning-wise, “only” should be placed after "was" so that "only" means “simply,” as in:
The labor surplus problem was already bad, and Operation B simply made that problem worse.
KEEP A, but look for better options
Quote:
B) Properly characterized, the economic problem Puerto Rico has is a surplus of labor, not overpopulation, and it only was aggravated when Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
• same problems as those in A:
has is and placement of
onlyKEEP, but now I am 99% sure that neither A nor B is the answer because A and B are so similar
Quote:
C) The economic problem of Puerto Rico is properly characterized not as overpopulation but as a surplus of labor, which was only aggravated when Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
• I see a common idiom: The problem is properly characterized
Not as X but as Y-- X = overpopulation and Y = a surplus of labor
-- X and Y are parallel nouns
• This phrasing is much clearer than that in A and B
• modification?
which correctly modifies
surplus of labor -- Correct.: that surplus of labor "was only aggravated" [was simply/just made worse] when Operation B led to decreased demand for labor.
KEEP
-- eliminate A and B (inferior to C)
-- compare D and E to (C).
Quote:
D) The economic problem of Puerto Rico is, properly characterized, a surplus of labor, not overpopulation, which only was aggravated when Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
• (D) improves upon (A) in two meager ways
-- the awkward verb “has” is gone
-- “and it” is replaced by “which.”
-- ignore pronoun ambiguity. It’s not worth your time because (C) is a better answer.
• D is similar to A and B. “only” is still a problem, as is
properly characterized Most importantly, D is inferior to C.
Eliminate D.
Quote:
E) Puerto Rico has, properly characterized, the economic problem of a surplus of labor, not overpopulation, and it was only aggravated when Operation Bootstrap resulted in a notable decline in the demand for labor.
• very similar to A, B, and D.
• the placement of
properly characterized is jarring
• when placed after the verb, “the” economic problem is strange and rhetorically weird.
-- Not idiomatic:
The boy has the fear of spiders, not heights. -- Better:
The boy has a fear of spiders, not heights.• E is not as good as C
Eliminate E
The answer is C• NOTESKeep your eyes on the prize. In other words, eliminate the four worst answers.
That process may come in "out of order." I couldn't eliminate A and B until I had read C.
I had to "double back" and strike through (A) and (B) on my paper.
If I cannot decide quickly that an option contains a fatal error, I do not keep looking for an error.
I keep the option. The other answers will give me more information than will staring at a bad sentence whose errors are slippery.
Eventually I saw that A, B, D, and E were similar, and that each was inferior to C.
COMMENTSTushrgupta , welcome to SC Butler.
A few of these explanations are really good, and a couple are outstanding.
All newcomers get kudos for their first post.
After that, in order to earn kudos, your post must explain things.
Assertion is not explanation.
I think it is hard to write explanations for questions in which options are not glaringly horrible in one or two clear ways, but just sort of all-around low-level bad.
Whatever the case, I am glad to have your posts. Happy kudos to those who explained.