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The United Automobile Workers returned to the A.F.L. - C.I.O. because of the wish of both groups to strengthen labor's role not only in politics but also industry.


A. of the wish of both groups to strengthen labor's role not only in politics but also industry.

B. both groups wished to strengthen labor's role in politics as well as in industry.

C. the strengthening of labor's role in politics as well as industry was wished for by both groups.

D. it was wished by both groups to strengthen labor's role in politics and industry as well.

E. Both groups wished to strengthen labor's role in both of the two areas of politics and industry.

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B.

Connectors like “as well as” or “not only . . . but also” must link like terms. So if you say “in politics,” you have to say “in industry.” (E) is unnecessarily wordy.
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Option A : 'in' after the phrase "but also" is missing (Against the principle of Parallel Construction).

Option B : Correct. (No errors)

Option C : Grammatically, it is correct but its a passive voice compared to B. Hence less preferable.

Option D : Use of 'both' and 'as well' is a sign of redundancy.

Option E : When 'both' is used it means it is pointing towards two entities. So, 'both of the two' is an incorrect use.
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But both should be followed by and , then how c is correct????

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Hey Ana,

B is the correct answer not C.
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