While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison was founded by Charles Hart and Charles Par when they invested all their assets in this first factory in the United States dedicated to the production of gas traction engines.
A) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison was founded by Charles Hart and Charles Par when they invested all their assets in this first factory in the United States dedicated to
The company was not studying at the universityB) In the late 1800s, while they were at the University of Wisconsin at Madison studying mechanical engineering, Charles Hart and Charles Par founded the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison, investing all their assets in this first United States factory dedicated to
inappropriate placement of "In the late 1800s" sentence structure is problematic.C) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par invested all their assets in founding the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison which was the first factory in the United States and was dedicated to
Meaning error: the original and intended meaning was that it was the first such factory which was dedicated to .... and not that it was the first factory in the US D) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par founded the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison, investing all their assets in this first factory in the United States which they dedicated to
"Which they" is redundant E) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par founded the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison, investing all their assets in this first factory in the United States dedicated to