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While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison was founded by Charles Hart and Charles Par when they invested all their assets in this first factory in the United States dedicated to the production of gas traction engines.
A) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison was founded by Charles Hart and Charles Par when they invested all their assets in this first factory in the United States dedicated to
The company was not studying at the university
B) In the late 1800s, while they were at the University of Wisconsin at Madison studying mechanical engineering, Charles Hart and Charles Par founded the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison, investing all their assets in this first United States factory dedicated to
inappropriate placement of "In the late 1800s" sentence structure is problematic.
C) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par invested all their assets in founding the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison which was the first factory in the United States and was dedicated to
Meaning Issue: which was the first factory in the US changes the intended meaning.
D) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par founded the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison, investing all their assets in this first factory in the United States which they dedicated to
"Which they" was not required here
E) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par founded the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison, investing all their assets in this first factory in the United States dedicated to
Hi!
I think C has parallelism.
C) While studying mechanical engineering at the University of Wisconsin at Madison in the late 1800s, Charles Hart and Charles Par invested all their assets in founding the Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison which
was the first factory in the United States and
was dedicated toAlso In D and E "this" is referring to "Hart-Parr Gasoline Engine Company of Madison" which was a factory. so I think company can be a factory.
I Narrowed down to C and E but chose C instead. Because I thought in E "Dedicated" after "united states" seems to modify united states and this is not the intended meaning. ?
Correct me if I am Wrong?
"Touch rule" in modifiers is not a strict rule and there can be exceptions. When some essential information can not be placed anywhere else except next to the noun it talks about, the noun modifier can modify the slightly far away noun. So, option E doesn't modify the US it properly modifies the noun "factory".
C is out because it changed the intended meaning.
E it is because NM can modify a slightly far away noun.
Apologies for the previous post.
Hope it's workable.
kudos to you.