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Using study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties,
the Swedish public was informed by the government about energy and nuclear power.(A) the Swedish public was informed by the government about energy and nuclear power
(B) the government informed the Swedish public about energy and nuclear power
(C) energy and nuclear power information was given to the Swedish public by the government
(D) information about energy and nuclear power was given to the Swedish public by the government
(E) the public of Sweden was given energy and nuclear power information by the government
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Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that the government used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties, and by doing so it informed the Swedish public about energy and nuclear power.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Awkwardness/Redundancy• In a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun; this is one of the most frequently tested concepts on GMAT sentence correction.
A: This answer choice incorrectly uses “Using study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties” to modify “the Swedish public”, incorrectly implying that
the Swedish public used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; the intended meaning is that
the government used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun. Further, Option A uses the passive construction "the Swedish public was informed", leading to awkwardness/redundancy.
B: Correct. This answer choice correctly uses “Using study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties” to modify “the government”, conveying the intended meaning – that
the government used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties. Further, Option B is free of any awkwardness or redundancy.
C: This answer choice incorrectly uses “Using study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties” to modify “energy and nuclear power information”, incorrectly implying that
the informationused study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; the intended meaning is that
the government used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun. Further, Option C uses the passive voice construction "energy and nuclear power information was given", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.
D: This answer choice incorrectly uses “Using study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties” to modify “information about energy and nuclear power”, incorrectly implying that
the information used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; the intended meaning is that
the government used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun. Further, Option D uses the passive voice construction "information about energy and nuclear power was given", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.
E: This answer choice incorrectly uses “Using study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties” to modify “the public of Sweden”, incorrectly implying that
the Swedish public used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; the intended meaning is that
the government used study groups managed by the principal popular organizations and political parties; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun. Further, Option E uses the passive construction "the public of Sweden was given energy and nuclear power information", leading to awkwardness/redundancy.
Hence, B is the best answer choice.To understand the concept of "Phrase Comma Subject" and "Subject Comma Phrase" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):
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Experts' Global Team