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EducationAisle AnthonyRitz GMATNinja EMPOWERgmatVerbalA query on
A vs CSome posts above mention the reasons of rejecting A :
1. A site once used as an observatory by the Anasazi,
ancient pueblo dwellers of New Mexico, --> i don't think modifier issue as ancient xxx new Mexico , could be non essential modifier .
2. A site is far from
where modifier in the sentence?
3.
where or
in which should be fine, right as this is a physical place?
4.
I didn't find any convincing reason to reject A so I went with focus on meaning
A says: Something is found out where XYZ was happening. Focus is on Found out
C says: At a recently found site, XYZ was happening--> focus is on XYZ
How can we decide what is more important ( main verb) to highlight as in A vs C?
Actually I thought priority is on something interesting is found out .
Could you help me to get rid of A over C . What point am I missing or doing wrong?
please suggest , Thanks!
I think the issue is that A has multiple subtle imperfections. Any one, in a vacuum, might be survivable, but together they make for a confusing, difficult-to-read sentence.
"has been recently discovered" is just worse than "has recently been discovered" or "recently discovered site"; the thing that is recent is the discovery -- the status of having been discovered -- but moving "recently" just one word down as in "has been recently discovered" suggests that the thing that occurred at an indefinite time in the past, or perhaps that began in the past and continues into the present, is the site's state of being "recently discovered" -- yet the state of being "recently discovered" is basically just a present status. Tiny issue, perhaps, but this phrasing is not ideal.
The "where" is also badly placed, making it sound like the
discovery took place where the patterns of light and shadow were employed. This may be technically true, but in this case the "site" is not modified at all, and as a result the latter part of the sentence is not clearly tied to the site's status as an observatory. And that's just weird, since these ideas are clearly meant to go together. Distance from the word "site" isn't inherently a killer for this modifier, but the ambiguity it creates and the double-take I have to do when reading are not desirable.
C looks flawless to me, so it's pretty easy at this point to pick it over A.
I don't think of this as an issue of "focus" at all.