Namangupta1997
Hi
ThatDudeKnowsI got question 2 wrong because the usage of the word "yet" after the semi-colon threw me off. While I agree with the OA, my question is about the usage of the word "yet". If we pay attention to the sentence structure of the last sentence, it begins with "White observes XYZ " and then there is a 'yet' followed by a mention of archeological discoveries. Isn't "yet" used normally used to show contrast or limitations to a certain argument? While the OA makes the perfect logical sense, I am not sure the usage of 'yet' is warranted here.
What am I missing?
Namangupta1997I'm a fan that you're looking for transition and structure clue words, like "yet." That's a GREAT habit.
In this case, what if we re-write that long last sentence in either of the following ways...would either or both of these have led you to getting the question correct on your first pass? If so, add to your transition/structure word spotting the ability to notice the impact of punctuation!! You don't need to dig into the specific terms "compound sentences" and "complex sentences," but it's worthwhile to identify opportunities to break up GMAC's long sentences. Semicolons can almost always be replaced by period.
As written:
White observes that Martin's thesis depends on coinciding dates for the arrival of humans and the decline of large animal species, and Krech, though aware that the dates are controversial, does not challenge them; yet recent archaeological discoveries are providing evidence that the date of human arrival was much earlier than 11,000 years ago.
Revision one:
White observes that Martin's thesis depends on coinciding dates for the arrival of humans and the decline of large animal species
., and Krech, though aware that the dates are controversial, does not challenge them; yet recent archaeological discoveries are providing evidence that the date of human arrival was much earlier than 11,000 years ago.
Revision two:
White observes that Martin's thesis depends on coinciding dates for the arrival of humans and the decline of large animal species
, and. Krech, though aware that the dates are controversial, does not challenge them
.; yYet recent archaeological discoveries are providing evidence that the date of human arrival was much earlier than 11,000 years ago.
I read both the versions of the revised sentence multiple times. Unfortunately, I am not able to grasp how the nuances in punctuation affect the meaning in this case. I'll still give it a shot :-
Rev 1 : It seems like the sentence starting with "yet" is written to give support to White's interpretation of Krech's theory. Or, simply put, it seems like an attack on Krech's theory. Not sure if I am right.
Rev 2 : "Yet" is preceded by a full stop. It is a new sentence. I am not sure which idea to connect it to now. Is it relating to White's interpretation of both the theories, just Krech's theory or it is a general statement?
Both the revisions and the original sentence seem too close. Ofcourse, if we understand the meaning of the given archeological discoveries, we can arrive at the answer. My question, though, still remains.
'Yet' is proving to be a real thorn in my understanding of the sentence structure.