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After losing his right arm to an injury sustained in World War I, the Austrian pianist Paul Wittgenstein
decided to focus on pieces written for the left hand instead of to quit his professional piano-playing career.
a) decided to focus on pieces written for the left hand instead of to quit
b) decided to focus on pieces written for the left hand instead of quitting
c) decided he ought to focus on pieces written for the left hand as opposed to quitting
d) decided to focus on pieces written for the left hand rather than quitting
e) decided to focus on pieces written for the left hand rather than quit
Kaplan's Explanation:Read the Original Sentence Carefully, Looking for Errors:
The sentence, as written, contains the incorrect idiom, "decided to focus … instead of to quit …." There are three correct ways to express the two options: "to X rather than Y," "to do X rather than do Y," or "to do X rather than Y." Additionally, the verbs used must be in parallel form.
Scan and Group the Answer Choices:
(A) and (B) use the phrase "instead of," (C) uses "as opposed to," and (D) and (E) use "rather than."
Eliminate Wrong Answer Choices:
(A), (B), and (C) are all incorrect idiomatically, per the rule explained above, and can be eliminated. (D) changes the word "quit" to "quitting." To be in parallel, "focus" must be joined by "quit." Thus, (D) can be eliminated as well. This leaves (E), which uses the proper idiom and is parallel, as the correct answer.
TAKEAWAY: In addition to checking whether comparisons and contrasts are parallel, make sure the wording is idiomatically correct.