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IMO E
as a young child - short, crisp and correct
All other options are wordier,redundant and awkward constructions.

u are correct with answer but why did u kill answer choice B?
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E??
concise..usage of being etc in other options
no while because no contrast is being shown,general statement has been given
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are correct with answer but why did u kill answer choice B?

tell me which one sounds better:
1. John played football while in childhood
2. John Played football as a young child.
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are correct with answer but why did u kill answer choice B?

tell me which one sounds better:
1. John played football while in childhood
2. John Played football as a young child.

i saw the diff already but I was wondering there any grammatical mistake this choice!
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IMO E
as a young child - short, crisp and correct
All other options are wordier,redundant and awkward constructions.

u are correct with answer but why did u kill answer choice B?

The reason why she must have eliminated choice E , because we are talking of Ralph as a child and not his childhood, So before " ralph " right word should be child and not childhood .
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Any ideas on why E instead of B in this question?

Will be happy to throw some Kudos out there!
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Can somebody please explain what is wrong with option A.
And Please do not say avoid " being " in GMAT.
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Can somebody please explain what is wrong with option A.
And Please do not say avoid " being " in GMAT.

while is used either in contrast or as a replacement of "when"
Neither works here.

Also being as a modifier NEVER works on the GMAT.
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Any ideas on why E instead of B in this question?

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B is out because of modifier problem. Ralph after the comma refers to "child", not to "childhood". Ralph is a "child", not a "childhood".
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Although he is reported to have spoken his mind freely while being a young child, Ralph Nader was 25 years old before he began to advocate professionally as an attorney.

(A) while being a young child
(B) while in childhood
(C) at the time of his being a child
(D) as being in childhood
(E) as a young child

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Correct Answer: E

Explanation: This question tests the ability to recognize Idiomatic English and to express ideas concisely and directly. Answer choices A, B, and D are all unidiomatic. Answer choices A and C violate the GMAT's preference for brevity. In addition, answer choice C illogically suggests that being a child occurs at a finite period in time rather than over a period of time. Answer choice E is the correct choice because it is brief, idiomatic, and correctly uses "as" as a preposition to mean "in the capacity, character, or role of."

as (conjunction) = in the same way
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while to indicate conflict ,A B out
being is used to show behaviour not reason
E is the answer
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Can someone please explain clearly why B is not correct. option E could also mean that adult ralph spoke his mind freely as a young child (does)
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Can someone please explain clearly why B is not correct. option E could also mean that adult ralph spoke his mind freely as a young child (does)
Option B is unidiomatic.

Unfortunately, we can't do much in such cases. We need to recognize that that particular construction is not valid in English and "blacklist" it.

If it helps, you can go through the official question on which this question is based.
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As per GMAT is it possible to have "although" and "while" in the same sentence?
an example or a link of an official question would be great :)

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