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I chose (E).

For parallel structure, we should use "Not so much to ... as to". (A) (C) (D) can be eliminated.

Between B and E, E is much preferred as it uses the verb in active mode (to move) instead of unnatural and long-winded gerund (the moving of).
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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.


A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

Check the Parallelism.
not so (much) to... as to...
thus, eliminate A,C,D.

Between B and E, the difference is "required to" or "required for"

required to do something - use to explain the purpose
required for - means necessary

In this case, choice E is more concise and convey the intended meaning.
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A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways
Not so much X as Y is the correct idiom---X and Y should be parallel
what follows much should also follow as to maintain the parallelism
Not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce --parallelism error (incorrect)

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways
required for the moving of vehicles---not the correct way to say and wordy---required to is required (incorrect)

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways
Not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as it has determined ways to reduce
Not so much to___as to---to maintain parallelism to is required after as

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways
Not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as in the determination of ways to reduce power
(incorrect)

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways
Not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as to determine----maintains parallelism
--required to--is correct here concise and idiomatic (correct)

generis can you please elaborate on ---required to vs required for
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Project SC Butler: Day 162: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.


A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Not parallel with "to calculate aerodynamic forces"

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - Awkward. Felt option E is better?

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - Same as option A

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways - Same as option A

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Correct. Maintains parallelism
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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.

A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways
B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways
C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways
D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways
E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

MEANING
wind testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much TO… as TO determine ways to reduce the power… to move;

A) "determining" not parallel;
B) "required for the moving" unintended;
C) "it has determined…" not parallel;
D) "in the determination" not parallel;

Answer (E)
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Project SC Butler: Day 162: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.

1st split: Not so much to [...] as to

A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways


(E) is more concise than (C) and conveys the same meaning.
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) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Not parallel with "to calculate aerodynamic forces"

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - Awkward. Felt option E is better?

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - Same as option A

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways - Same as option A

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Correct. Maintains parallelism

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IMO correct option is E

Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.


A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Parallelism issue, not so much X as Y - X & Y should be parallel with each other - Incorrect

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - E is better than B; Incorrect

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - Same as A

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways - Same as A

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Correct
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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.


A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways[/quote]


In this question
First: idiom is tested.
not so much to X as to Y
so the answer options A, C and D is eliminated

Second: In remaining answer choice B "for the moving of" is wordy. Instead "to move" is correct
also "required to" is correct construction
so correct answer choice is "E"
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Project SC Butler: Day 162: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.


A) determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

C) it has determined ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways

D) in the determination of ways to reduce power required to move vehicles on roadways

E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways

Let's try this.
Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate - If you were careful when reading this part of the sentence then you should have realize you just read "not so much to XX" and in the later part of the sentence you will need one more "to" after the comparative "as" to make things parallel.
That itself helps you get rid of A C and D.

Between B and E: "required for the moving of" vs "required to move vehicles". I mean E is the better structure and more concise.

Hence E.
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Normally associated with airplane construction, wind-tunnel testing has also been applied to automobiles, not so much to calculate aerodynamic forces as determining ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways at a given speed.

Parallelism is the key here. When we use the Idiom' Not so much X as Y'. It basically means to prefer Y over X.
Where the elements X and Y must be parallel to logically convey the meaning.

X= to calculate Y= determining . So, clearly, parallelism is not maintained and choice E conveys the correct meaning by modifying determining to to determine.

IMHO E
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I have posted the official explanation HERE
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IMO option E
On reading the sentence, noticed "Not So...As" should be followed by "to". Negated options A,C, and D.
Between option B and E:
B) to determine ways to reduce the power required for the moving of vehicles on roadways - use of 'For' is not correct here.
E) to determine ways to reduce the power required to move vehicles on roadways - Correct usage of 'to' - says 'in order to do something'.
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