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Residents of Iqaluit, the largest town in the Canadian territory of Nunavut, pay as much as four times
the prices paid for grocery items by residents of large Canadian cities, most of which enter the town only by sealift.
(A) the prices paid for grocery items by residents of large Canadian cities
(B) the price of what large Canadian city residents pay for grocery items
(C) what residents of large Canadian cities pay for grocery items
(D) of what large Canadian city residents pay for grocery items
(E) the cost of the grocery items purchased by large Canadian cities’ residents
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
According to this sentence, residents of the Arctic town of Iqaluit pay much higher prices than do their counterparts in Canada’s large cities. To make a proper comparison,
four times… must be followed by a noun, or equivalent phrase, for the price paid by Canadians living in cities. Also, it is clear from context that the modifier
most of which… describes
grocery items, so
grocery items must come directly before that modifier.
(A) In this choice,
most of which enter… is attached to
large Canadian cities, illogically suggesting that entire cities are sealifted into Iqaluit.
(B)
What … residents pay already signifies a price, so
the price of what… illogically suggests that this price itself has a price.
Large Canadian city residents seems to refer to large people living in Canadian cities, rather than to residents of large cities as intended.
(C) CORRECT. The noun phrase
what residents … pay represents the price paid by city residents, so
four times what residents … pay is properly constructed. The modifier
most of which enter… correctly modifies
grocery items.
(D)
Four times of… is unidiomatic.
Large Canadian city residents seems to refer to large people living in Canadian cities, rather than to residents of large cities as intended.
(E) In this choice,
most of which enter… is attached to
large Canadian cities’ residents, illogically suggesting that Canadians from larger cities, rather than groceries, are sealifted into Iqaluit. The construction
the grocery items purchased by… illogically suggests that residents of Iqaluit and of larger cities are somehow paying for
the same items (not just identical items).