anuj1. GMAT Sentence Correction: the “Due To” Mistake
'Due to' is an adjective and hence has to modify a noun. 'Because of' is an adverbial phrase and hence has to modify some action.
How does it happen in the real context?
His late arrival was due to the engine failure
Here the adjectival phrase 'due to' modifies the noun arrival.
It will be wrong to say that he arrived late due to the engine failure.
Similarly, it will be wrong to say that his arrival was delayed because of engine failure.
More examples of due to and because of usage
He could not eat due to digestive problems -- wrong
He could not eat because of digestive problems -- correct
He scored low due to carelessness - wrong
His score was low due to carelessness: correct
Mark correct or incorrect
Her brilliant performance was because of her coach's rigorous training
Her brilliant performance was due to her coach's rigorous training
She performed brilliantly due to her coach's rigorous training
She performed brilliantly because of her coach's rigorous training
Some banks have heavily lost because of inadequate supervision
Some banks have heavily lost due to inadequate supervision
Some banks' heavy losses are due to inadequate supervision
Some banks' heavy losses are because of inadequate supervision
Most examples are taken from Magoosh <https://magoosh.com/gmat/2016/gmat-sentence-correction-due-mistake/>
(choose the answer first and then cross check with Magoosh Blog)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repairing
due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing in the walls.
A. due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B. due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C. because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D. because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize
E. because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing
2) I
n the Battle of Roncevaux Pass in 778, the rearguard of the Frankish army, under the command of Roland, was obliterated due to an ambush by the Basque army, an event made famous in La Chanson de Roland.(A) In the Battle of Roncevaux Pass in 778, the rearguard of the Frankish army, under the command of Roland, was obliterated due to an ambush by the Basque army, an event made famous in La Chanson de Roland
(B) In the Battle of Roncevaux Pass in 778, the Basque army ambushed the Frankish army, the rearguard of the Frankish army, under the command of Roland, was obliterated, and the event was made famous in La Chanson de Roland
(C) La Chanson de Roland made famous the obliteration, due to an ambush by the Basque army, of the rearguard of the Frankish army, under the command of Roland, at the Battle of Roncevaux Pass in 778
(D) In La Chanson de Roland, the Basque army ambushed the rearguard of the Frankish army, under the command of Roland, and obliterated them, and this event was famous at the Battle of Roncevaux Pass in 778
(E) In the Battle of Roncevaux Pass in 778, the rearguard of the Frankish army, under the command of Roland, ambushed and obliterated by the Basque army, an event made famous in La Chanson de Roland
3. The number of acres destroyed by wildfires, which
have become an ongoing threat due to drought and booming population density, have increased dramatically over the past several years, prompting major concern among local politicians.
A have become an ongoing threat due to drought and booming population density, have increased
B have become an ongoing threat due to drought and booming population density, have been increasing
C has become an ongoing threat because of drought and booming population density, has increased
D have become an ongoing threat due to drought and booming population density, has increased
E. have become an ongoing threat because of drought and booming population density, has increased
4) None of the typical physical properties, such as color, hardness, and melting point, of the element Astatine is
known because, due to its high radioactivity, it almost immediate decays into something else.(A) known because, due to its high radioactivity, it almost immediately decays into something else
(B) known due to the fact that it decays almost immediately into something else because of its high radioactivity
(C) known if, because of its high radioactivity, it almost immediately decays into something else
(D) known: because of its high radioactivity, it almost immediately decays into something else
(E) known: due to its high radioactivity, it almost immediately decays into something else
5) The motion of the Sun in the sky, as well as the Moon and planets and stars,
are because of the rotation of the Earth: everything rises in the East and sets in the West.
(A) are because of
(B) is because of
(C) are caused by
(D) is due to
(E) are due to
6. According to classical Marxism, the class
struggle, caused by economic inequity, bringing about the universal workers’ revolution that would end history.
(A) struggle, caused by economic inequity, bringing about the universal workers’ revolution that would end history
(B) struggle, due to economic inequity, would bring about the universal workers’ revolution, thereby ending history
(C) struggle, which was brought about by economic inequity, causing the universal workers’ revolution that would end history
(D) struggle was because of economic inequity, and it would bring about the universal workers’ revolution and the end of history
(E) struggle was due to economic inequity, bringing about the universal workers’ revolution and ending history
7)
In 1865, the then-revolutionary sound of Wagner’s opera Tristan und Isolde was due to the relative atonality of the so-called “Tristan chord.”
(A) In 1865, the then-revolutionary sound of Wagner’s opera Tristan und Isolde was due to the relative atonality of the so-called “Tristan chord.”
(B) In 1865, Wagner created what was then a revolutionary sound in his opera Tristan und Isolde, this sound caused by the relative atonality of the so-called “Tristan chord.”
(C) In 1865, the relative atonality of the so-called “Tristan chord” was causing the then-revolutionary sound of Wagner’s opera Tristan und Isolde.
(D) Because of the relative atonality of the so-called “Tristan chord,” Wagner’s 1865 opera, Tristan und Isolde, had a then-revolutionary sound.
(E) The relative atonality of the so-called “Tristan chord” has caused the then-revolutionary sound of Wagner’s 1865 opera Tristan und Isolde.