OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 166: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
The French Revolution of 1830, also known as the July Revolution or the Second French Revolution, saw the overthrow of King Charles X, the French Bourbon monarch, and the ascent of his cousin Louis-Philippe, who himself would be deposed after 18 precarious years on the throne.
• I detect no errors.
• Strip the sentence of nonessential modifiers to see whether the sentence still makes sense:
The French Revolution of 1830 . . . saw the overthrow of King Charles X . . . and the ascent of his cousin Louis-Philippe, who himself would be deposed after 18 precarious years on the throne.That sentence works.
Meaning? The French Revolution of 1830 included the overthrow of King Charles X and the ascent of Charles's cousin Louis-Philippe; after 18 precarious years on the thrown, Louis-Philippe was also deposed.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) The French Revolution of 1830, also known as the July Revolution or the Second French Revolution, saw the overthrow of King Charles X, the French Bourbon monarch, and the ascent of his cousin Louis-Philippe, who himself would be deposed after 18 precarious years on the throne.
• Option A seems fine.
Quote:
B) The French Revolution of 1830, also known as the July Revolution or the Second French Revolution, saw the overthrow of King Charles X, the French Bourbon monarch, and the ascent of Louis-Philippe, [comma splice] his cousin had himself been deposed after 18 precarious years on the throne.
• comma splice
-- the word
his after the highlighted comma creates a new sentence.
-- two clauses (sentences) must be joined by more than a comma -- a conjunction is required
Eliminate B
Quote:
C) The French Revolution of 1830, also known as the July Revolution or the Second French Revolution, saw the overthrow of King Charles X, the French Bourbon monarch, and Louis-Philippe's ascent, his cousin who, after 18 precarious years on the throne, was deposed.
•
his cousin who should logically refer to Louis-Philippe, but
Louis-Philippe does not appear—only Louis Philippe's
ascent.
• the actual referent of
his cousin who is
ascent, a construction that makes no sense. An ascent is not a cousin.
Eliminate C
Quote:
D) The French Revolution of 1830, also known as the July Revolution or the Second French Revolution, saw the overthrow of King Charles X, the French Bourbon monarch, and the ascent of his cousin Louis-Philippe, whose deposition himself would come after 18 precarious years on the throne.
• reflexive pronouns such as
himself are used to refer to the noun that immediately precedes the reflexive pronoun. That noun is
deposition.
• a deposition is a
thing. The reflexive pronoun
himself must refer to a person.
• absurd meaning: this option implies that the deposition spent 18 years on the throne. (Um, no. Louis-Philippe spent 18 years on the throne.)
Eliminate D
Quote:
E) The French Revolution of 1830, also known as the July Revolution or the Second French Revolution, saw the overthrow of King Charles X, the French Bourbon monarch, and his cousin Louis-Philippe's ascent, which would himself be deposed after 18 precarious years on the throne.
•
himself is a person and cannot refer to the non-human pronoun
which.
• referent problem similar to that in (C):
himself refers illogically to
ascent rather than
Louis-PhilippeEliminate E
Reflexive pronouns in English are very effective. English does not repeat subject references very often.
Reflexive pronounse are most commonly used when the doer and recipient of the action are the same person or thing:
He gave himself an epinephrine shot.In this case, the reflexive pronoun says, "and it happened to him, too!"
That is, the reflexive pronoun
himself in option A (
who himself would be deposed) is a very efficient way to say that what happened to Charles X also happened to Louis-Philippe.
Such variety in these good answers!
Variety is good.
Some of these answers are hilarious (in a good way -- they made me laugh).
I am glad to see people showing their personalities.
All of the answers display the right mindset: Dear GMAC, I am not fooled. I win. The End.
The depth and breadth of understanding evident on this thread is impressive.
Nice work. Kudos to all.