SajjadAhmad
The most prominent result of Professor Winick's archaeological research has been discovering that a pharaoh who had ruled in the last days of Egypt was buried with fewer artifacts than their earlier counterparts.
A. discovering that a pharaoh who had ruled in the last days of Egypt was buried with fewer artifacts than their
B. the discovery that pharaohs who had ruled in the last days of Egypt were not buried with as many arti-facts as their
C. to discover that pharaohs, which ruled in the last days of Egypt, was buried with fewer artifacts than their
D. the discovery that pharaohs who ruled in the last days of Egypt were buried with fewer artifacts than were their
E. to discover that a pharaoh who ruled in the last days of Egypt was buried with fewer artifacts than were his
+1 to D
A:
discovering that
a pharaoh who had ruled in the last days of Egypt was buried with fewer artifacts than
their -- Most prominent result has been... discovering? Also, subject verb disagreement.
B: the discovery that pharaohs who had ruled in the last days of Egypt were not buried with as many arti-facts as their -- hold
C:
to discover that pharaohs,
which ruled in the last days of Egypt,
was buried with fewer artifacts than their -- subject-verb disagreement, "who" instead of "which"
D: the discovery that pharaohs who ruled in the last days of Egypt were buried with fewer artifacts than were their -- hold
E:
to discover that a pharaoh who ruled in the last days of Egypt was buried with fewer artifacts than were his
Between B and D, I think D is clearer and B embellishes the meaning a little bit. "Not as many" can mean more or fewer artifacts. It's slightly more vague and therefore should be dropped.