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A. Strong preexisting beliefs or theories by a person, particularly ones that were validated in the past, makes it likely to interpret, regardless of its implications, any new evidence as confirmation of those theories and beliefs. - S-V agreement error. [...] theories [....] make

B. A person who has strong preexisting beliefs or theories, particularly ones that were validated in the past, makes interpreting any new evidence as confirmation of those beliefs and theories, regardless of its actual implications, more likely. - more likely could've been placed just after the theories. Not a bad choice until we find something better than this

C. A person who is having strong preexisting beliefs or theories is likely to interpret any new evidence, regardless of its actual implications, as confirmation of those theories and beliefs, particularly ones that were validated in the past. - A person having it continuously?, furthermore the structure of modifier could be better than this

D. A person's having strong preexisting beliefs or theories, particularly ones that were validated in the past, makes that person likely to interpret any new evidence, regardless of its actual implications, as confirmation of those theories and beliefs. - Disastrous. I'm just not able to find out the subject of verb makes

E. Having strong preexisting beliefs or theories, particularly ones that were validated in the past, makes it more likely that a person will interpret any new evidence, regardless of its actual implications, as confirmation of those theories and beliefs. - Having [..something..] makes. Seems fine

(E) should be the correct answer
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E. Having strong preexisting beliefs or theories, particularly ones that were validated in the past, makes it more likely that a person will interpret any new evidence, regardless of its actual implications, as confirmation of those theories and beliefs. - Having [..something..] makes. Seems fine

(E) should be the correct answer

Is it right that a -ing modifier separated with a comma "Having strong preexisting beliefs or theories, particularly ones that were validated in the past, makes" can be the subject of a sentence ?
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Could there be any other official reason to discard C, other than calling it wordy? For an official explanation, it is no greatly convincing. The OA itself admits that the C is more direct in saying "A person is likely' rather than convoluted phrasing ("preexisting beliefs make it likely that a person will ' as in E.

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Hi,
How is D wrong here. If i remember correctly a possessive form before a gerund is not wrong. Besides it makes perfectly clear who is having the beliefs and who is likely to interpret, a clarity that option E lacks in my opinion.

The only issue i can see in D could be a lack of proper reference for 'that'. Am i analysing this correctly?
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