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Total cloud inversion, which looks like a sea of clouds, occurs about once every decade at the Grand Canyon but had been rarely captured on film until recently.
Hi,
Two independent clauses joined by but.
So,
Total cloud inversion occurs about once every decade at the Grand Canyon
BUThad been rarely captured on film until recently.
Use of past perfect had been is correct as "until recently" has set the timeline.
Subject-
verb pair/s: Correct
Modifier: inside a comma pair and in non-underlined portion. Looks alright.
Pronoun:None,
Meaning: Clear and crisp.
Quote:
A. occurs about once every decade at the Grand Canyon but had been rarely captured
Keep it.
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B. occurs about once every decade but had rarely been captured at the Grand Canyon
rarely should modify captured not been.
IncorrectQuote:
C. appear about once every decade at the Grand Canyon although rarely captured
appear changes the meaning. Using appear could mean that this phenomenon occurs but is only visible sometimes. Use of although is incorrect too.
IncorrectQuote:
D. appear about once every decade at the Grand Canyon, although rarely having been captured
Same as C. having been is uncalled for.
IncorrectQuote:
E. appear about once every decade at the Grand Canyon, which has rarely been captured
which is incorrectly modifying Grand canyon
Incorrect