OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
It seems probable that the group of chemical compounds known as the biogenic amines
may play an important role in causing mental depression.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A)
may play B)
play C) plays
D)
might play E)
has been playingFind the subject of the sentence.
This subject is hard.
that the group of chemical compounds
known as the biogenic amines-- eliminate
that the to clean things up
-- eliminate
known as the biogenic aminesThat phrase is an essential adjective that modifies
chemical compounds and cannot be placed elsewhere
We are left with
. ..
group of chemical compoundsEliminate the prepositional phrase that immediately follows
group.
--
chemical compounds is the object of the preposition OF, and the object of a preposition is
never the subject of a sentence.
Result?
• Split #1: Subject verb agreementThe subject is
group.Group is a collective noun that takes a singular verb.
Option B uses
play, plural.
Eliminate B
• Split #2 - The sentence already suggests uncertainty - avoid redundancyThe phrase
it seems probable already tells readers that uncertainty is lurking.
Seems is "soft" word.
Probable is an uncertain word.
Option A uses
may playOption D uses
might play.Both suggest uncertainty.
They are virtually identical.
Both are redundant.
Eliminate A and D.
• Split #3 - meaning No one has taken on option E directly yet.
Understandable. This question looks as though it's concerned with verbs.
It is.
But the meaning of option E is kinda silly as it stands.
The verb
has been playing suggests that the
biogenic amines just
recently started to play a role in causing mental depression (or at some point not too far in the past).
What, the amines started to cause depression only a decade ago? Only 30 years ago? 50 years ago?
Nonsense.
These amines either did play and do play, or did not and do not play, a role in causing depression.
I'm no biologist, but I'm going to bet that
biogenic amines have been part of homo sapiens sapiens for a long time.
In other words, although the sentence approaches its claim tentatively, the sentence describes what will probably be a scientific truth.
We need a tentative guess ("It seems probable that") about a general and solid truth (amines play a role in causing depression).
OPtion E conveys the wrong timing.
Eliminate E
The answer is C.COMMENTSSKY396 , welcome to SC Butler.
These answers are pretty good.
And by all means trust your instincts: if you read enough, you'll know when a sentence just seems "off" slightly, even if you can't explain why.
I don't see any posts that address option E.
Why is the use of present continuous wrong? (An again, well done for catching something that must have seemed wrong to you.)
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