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Project SC Butler: Day 150: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells how the market performs throughout the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.

Sentence Structure
Subject - Verb
      According to The Stock Trader's Almanac,
    the performance of stocks in January foretells
      how the market will perform during the year
    , but statistics experts warn
      that causation is impossible to prove.

Issues:
    B and C Possessiveness of inanimate things distorts the coherent meaning

    The keyword in this prompt is foretells in the non-underlined portion of the sentence.
    To foretell is To Predict.
    By definition, to predict something is to talk about the future.
    The correct answer will include a verb in the future-tense. - Picked the pertinent info from generis.


Answer choice analysis:
    A) how the market performs throughout the year
      Tense error.

    B) the market's performing throughout the year
      Possessiveness of inanimate things distorts the coherent meaning

    C) the performance of the year's market
      Possessiveness of inanimate things distorts the coherent meaning

    D) what the market will perform like in the year
      Colloquial usage. Higly non-GMAT structure. OUT

    E) how the market will perform during the year
      During + will is a proper pairing in this context of the future-action relating to the future-event.
      Ex:
        I will visit Venice during the last month of the year. - Correct.
        The visit( future-action) is coined with the upcoming event - last month of the year( Future-time)
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IMO correct option is A

According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells how the market performs throughout the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.

A) how the market performs throughout the year - simple present tense is justified to be used for a generalized fact, by generalized fact here, i mean the conception of "The Stock Trader's Almanac" - Correct

B) the market's performing throughout the year - Possessive usage is incorrect

C) the performance of the year's market - same as B

D) what the market will perform like in the year - "perform like" is awkward usage. - Incorrect

E) how the market will perform during the year - will perform is not the correct tense used here.
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According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells how the market performs throughout the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.

A) how the market performs throughout the year - INCORRECT

AS THE PROMPT "FORETELLS", THE CORRECT TENSE TO BE USED IS FUTURE TENSE (I.E. WILL...)

B) the market's performing throughout the year - INCORRECT

THE USE OF A GERUND HERE IS WRONG WHEN THERE'S A BETTER NOUN TO REPRESENT IT (I.E. "PERFORMANCE")

C) the performance of the year's market - INCORRECT

INDIRECT AND WORDY.

D) what the market will perform like in the year - INCORRECT

LIKE SHOULD ONLY BE USED FOR COMPARING TWO COMPARABLE THINGS

E) how the market will perform during the year - CORRECT

USES "WILL PERFORM" TO INDICATE A FUTURE FORECAST

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According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells how the market performs throughout the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.

A) how the market performs throughout the year - INCORRECT

AS THE PROMPT "FORETELLS", THE CORRECT TENSE TO BE USED IS FUTURE TENSE (I.E. WILL...)

B) the market's performing throughout the year - INCORRECT

THE USE OF A GERUND HERE IS WRONG WHEN THERE'S A BETTER NOUN TO REPRESENT IT (I.E. "PERFORMANCE")

C) the performance of the year's market - INCORRECT

INDIRECT AND WORDY.

D) what the market will perform like in the year - INCORRECT

LIKE SHOULD ONLY BE USED FOR COMPARING TWO COMPARABLE THINGS

E) how the market will perform during the year - CORRECT

USES "WILL PERFORM" TO INDICATE A FUTURE FORECAST

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With (E) for the same reasons as described in (E).
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I was quite torn between A and E. For that reason, I will firstly describe my reasoning for eliminating the other options.

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(B)According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells the market's performing throughout the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.
I was not entirely sure whether "market's performing" is acting as possessive or as "is performing". Correct me if I am wrong but I believe GMAT does not use contractions and thus it is acting as possessive. Wrong

Quote:
(C)According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells the performance of the year's market, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.
All seems to be well until we get to "year's market". As if there was a market where one could buy "years". Wrong

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(D)According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells what the market will perform like in the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.
Firstly, we definitively want to use "how will the market perform". The structure "what the XXX will perform" seems to indicate that the market will put on a show (think theater performance). Secondly, "perform like" is an another suspect. Especially when it is used in conjunction with time duration. We cannot substitute "like" for "throughout" or "during". Wrong

Between A and E, I decided to go with E. I wish I had a profound reason why but I really don't. The answer A reminds me of zero conditional that is used for something that is always correct. For instance, if you mix blue and yellow, you get green. Notice, that it does not use "you will get green". Even though this case is not a conditional, the "foretells" seems to signal future. Thus, future simple tense seems to be the best choice.
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According to The Stock Trader's Almanac, the performance of stocks in January foretells how the market performs throughout the year, but statistics experts warn that causation is impossible to prove.

A) how the market performs throughout the year ( they are expecting for the coming up year so, future tense is apt as compared to E option, so wrong)

B) the market's performing throughout the year ( foretells the performing, its a meaning error)


C) the performance of the year's market (its ugly and wordy, so it causes the meaning error hence. wrong)


D) what the market will perform like in the year ( usage of like is wrong)


E) how the market will perform during the year (right, properly uses the futuretense against present tense in opiton A, as these are very close options. i go with E)
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